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Segovia and Or Madrid

I vacationed in Segovia and also spent downtime in Madrid but which is why matters not where for I forgot what I there did. My days spent in Segovia and in Madrid were solo though I cannot prove that truth for I took not one single photo. I know that times in Segovia and Madrid combined were expensive, especially my time spent in jail cause one city nailed me "offensive." So be it Segovia or Madrid - a utopia or dystopia grid - I'm a rude nuisance who's crude presence both cities united to forbid. ... CayCay July 27, 2019

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Date: 8/23/2019 8:19:00 AM
LOL this is rather good...like the quirky segues at the end. I've spent some 'down-time' in Madrid also, but alas I cannot boast of jail time there!
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Date: 7/28/2019 2:51:00 PM
Ha, ha! Delightful contrarian write, CayCay! Just what the doctor ordered, for me at least. Just love the sassy tone! Best of luck in the contest with this unique entry. :) gw
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Date: 7/28/2019 9:36:00 PM
You bless me always, but extra so today because you taught me the word 'contrarian' and I LOVE it. I speak fluent contrary, if you will, and also dig into contrary writes so now I have a new word to use with my comments. May my memory recall this blessing and that is in no way a contrarian comment. Oh, such fun using that word! ... CayCay
Date: 7/28/2019 2:24:00 PM
haha, I am doubting that you ever went to those two cities, but I can tell you I did!! I love what you did with the subject. This is one contest I cannot even enter, but I sure hope it is a success for you, sweet friend.
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Date: 7/28/2019 10:30:00 AM
I very much so enjoyed reading your creative write on the theme...perhaps the mugshot would be proof of your time spent there...lol such a fun poem :) hugs
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Date: 7/28/2019 12:16:00 AM
A fun one, some of my best memories are probably the ones I can’t remember.
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Date: 7/27/2019 6:36:00 PM
how interesting is this work, cay... much enjoyed how you treated the theme in an unconventional way... greeat job!...huggs
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Date: 7/27/2019 6:20:00 PM
Very well penned, CayCay!! Best wishes.. Panagiota
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