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Seen the Wind

noon sun's halo at play silence echoing away scarecrow sways the day warm wind, somehow seen snaking across cornfields green winged, serpentine!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/12/2009 9:59:00 AM
This is just beautiful Romeo, love the format that you used, so pretty and soft! Captivating write and thanks :) for your comments on my poetry. Have a wonderful weekend (it'll be here soon! yay) Amy
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