Seen It All

That mirror mounted above the bed
Has most certainly seen it all
Those beneath would have a surprise
If that mirror would happen to fall


Mirror Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Chircop Avatar
June 15, 2013 at 1:50 PM
Hehe : ) Very humorous..Ow that mirror -very amusing post
Seal Avatar
June 13, 2013 at 9:58 AM
Good one Rick, this brought so many images up, is true though, mirrors can be so telling. Take care, Richard
Lamoureux Avatar
June 14, 2013 at 8:29 AM
Thanks Richard have a great day.
Hicks Avatar
June 13, 2013 at 12:11 AM
You know, there's no doubt the funny side to this... but I can see the metaphor as well... reflections coming back to bite you? It seems strangely eerie to have a mirror directly above you while you do your business... just asking for trouble, ha ha!
Lamoureux Avatar
June 13, 2013 at 7:22 AM
When you reach a certain age you avoid reflections, Ha ha.
Jordan Avatar
June 12, 2013 at 11:53 AM
So mirrors have eyes/ You bet they do... Jack
Lamoureux Avatar
June 12, 2013 at 5:51 PM
Ha ha, hopefully not.
Andresen Avatar
June 12, 2013 at 10:36 AM
- Broken mirror ..... means: seven years of bad luck Richard! - Good luck in the contest! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Lamoureux Avatar
June 12, 2013 at 5:51 PM
I think I will be safe.
Bono Avatar
June 12, 2013 at 8:18 AM
no one knows whats behind that mirror in the bedroom except the people who have been in front.Very nicely done and good luck.My daughter Megan entered this one.
Bono Avatar
June 12, 2013 at 12:11 PM
Megan Devon
Lamoureux Avatar
June 12, 2013 at 8:30 AM
Thanks Collen. What is your daughters name on the soup?
Tacito Avatar
June 12, 2013 at 8:05 AM
HAAAA! That's so hilarious!!! I'd pay to see that happen. Excellent job!
Lamoureux Avatar
June 12, 2013 at 8:30 AM
Glad to amuse!
Van Breda Avatar
June 12, 2013 at 7:27 AM
Very amusing and a clever write for the competition... I think this one will bring my ratings down-- also entered :)
Lamoureux Avatar
June 12, 2013 at 7:43 AM
What is the name of the poem you entered? Thanks for commenting.
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