Seems Early

it’s mild and sunny
warm and funny
i feel alive and perky
can it be that it's spring so soon? 

my body feels vibrantly alive
my insides as jittery as five beehives
sure spring rolls around yearly
but doesn't it seem just a wee bit early?

still i have these urges i can’t deny
to jump reach up and touch the sky
to dance and laugh openly with joy 
make friends with every girl and boy

the sun shines so flamboyantly
can it be that springtime's here
and knocking at my door? 



AP: 2nd place 2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Krutsinger Avatar
February 5, 2020 at 4:48 PM
Enthusiasm hops out of this one!
Kiser Avatar
February 5, 2020 at 12:39 PM
Very cheerful. As I sit here on this gray day, this was a wonderful read; I hope Spring gets here soon. Enjoyed.
Somadas Avatar
February 2, 2020 at 11:50 PM
It may be your mind's spring time.. Wonderful poem with positive vibes..
Gauthier Avatar
February 3, 2020 at 10:59 AM
Those rare mild sunny days are so enchanting. Thanks, Jenish.
Wolf Avatar
February 2, 2020 at 4:22 PM
It's Spring for a day. Thanks for the poem to help enjoy it! Cheers, Gershon
Gauthier Avatar
February 2, 2020 at 6:19 PM
Exactly. Spring for a day! Well said, Gershon. We should have collaborated on this one. LOL
Mweetwa Avatar
February 2, 2020 at 12:32 AM
Nicely written Line, it is cheerful and refreshing.
Gauthier Avatar
February 2, 2020 at 7:43 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Michelo.
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