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Seeking Serenity

Tide runs in then runs out. Serene rhythms. It knows where it's going and where it's been. My life has been ebbs and flows like the tide but my rhythms have not been serene, yet.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/15/2011 9:07:00 PM
wow, i love the way each one compliments the other. I am sure Chris will be looking for that in his grand winners! way to go with this entry.
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Date: 6/15/2011 12:06:00 PM
I love the introspection, along with the thought of nature and the tides. Entwined...a great job. You have two wonderful entries to choose from for the contest!:) ps...thank you for reminding me to date and name my entry to your contest! I've been having trouble with PS..not letting me edit. Just now was able to edit my poem...Thanks again!!
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Date: 6/14/2011 1:22:00 PM
Very beautiful Francine.
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Date: 6/14/2011 12:24:00 PM
I have enjoyed reading your fasinating poetry today Francine. Wishing you a beautiful week filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/14/2011 9:39:00 AM
Deep, meaningful, introspective tetractys, Francine. Really a brilliant poem and I think this is the one to enter. It touched my heart. Have many thoughts such as these as I look out upon the sea. Still looking to find my rhythm and hope that when I do, it is serene. Extraordinary work! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/13/2011 9:45:00 PM
Love the "yet" part...beautifully done. BG
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