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Seeking Serenity

When it seems the world turns upside down I am airborne by problems, falling Seeking serenity to erase my frown While wanting to run out of town I can hear the mountains calling Where strength resides and is renewed Where the slopes of serenity shine With all the beauty to be viewed To study my path to be pursued Some choices in my destiny are mine! Heidi Sands 4/5/18 *Placed 2nd in the Rhyme 2 contest. Rhyme: A-B-A-A-B C-D-C-C-D

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Robert Lindley

Date: 4/28/2018 8:54:00 AM

BEAUTY, DEPTH AND MESSAGE SO EVIDENT IN THIS GEM MY FRIEND. Perfect closing stanza!!!! A fav....

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/28/2018 10:09:00 AM

Thank you so much Robert. I am happy you like this and appreciate your comment. Have a nice day :)

Eve Roper

Date: 4/25/2018 9:26:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Heidi, wonderful poem ..Hugs Eve ~`*

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/26/2018 3:27:00 AM

Thank you so much Eve :)

John Gondolf

Date: 4/25/2018 8:09:00 AM

Heidi, I get a peaceful feeling just reading this poem, congrats on your win. John

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/25/2018 11:48:00 AM

Oh, thank you so much John. I am happy to hear that. :)

James Inman

Date: 4/25/2018 7:23:00 AM

Heidi, a well thought out write. Sometimes you just have to reach out and grab that moment for yourself.

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/25/2018 7:24:00 AM

Thank you very much James :)

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 4/25/2018 2:46:00 AM

Congratulations, Heidi on your fine win.

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/25/2018 6:14:00 AM

Thank you Subimal :)

Susan Gentry

Date: 4/24/2018 5:27:00 PM

A fave for me. Congratulations on your win. The flow and sentiment of this is magical.

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/24/2018 6:34:00 PM

I am happy to hear that Susan! Thank you. :)

Lu Loo

Date: 4/24/2018 8:52:00 AM

beautiful poem sweet Heidi as always congratulations and thank you ;) -luloo

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/24/2018 9:01:00 AM

Thank you Laura. I appreciate your kind comment and placement. :)

Frederic Parker

Date: 4/5/2018 9:15:00 PM

A really nice entry, there's serenity when the choices made are our own...good luck

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/6/2018 7:24:00 AM

Thank you Frederic :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/5/2018 4:15:00 PM

I like the way you took a turn in the second stanza..from upside down and falling.. to the slopes of serenity and beauty to be viewed..the ending line is great! Best for a win, Heidi.

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/5/2018 4:29:00 PM

Thank you Vijay! I am happy you like that. :)