Seeking

The last missile struck A once paradise now dies In suspended sleep ~~~~~~~~~~~ A pod leaves, seeking new life Refugees or asylum ¬
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Smalling Avatar
September 29, 2010 at 9:04 AM
Jim, thought I would drop by my friend today, and see what his inspiration have to say ... well this one is profound, brevity uses mystery as a metaphor to unmask satiric genius. Well done, my friend
Kendrick Avatar
September 28, 2010 at 3:42 PM
Interesting write..I suppose that this pod is going to out of space...Thanks for your kind comments on my work..Sara
Dietrich Avatar
September 24, 2010 at 8:16 PM
sounds like sci fi with those pods mentioned!! These small forms are so fun to write in.
Culverhouse Avatar
September 24, 2010 at 12:37 PM
interesting write... enjoyed today!
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