Seek Elsewhere Death!

She,
hung a,
Hummingbird,
Feeder near the,
Window of my room,
So I can look outside,
See life again as God's gift,
And raise my broken spirits up.
She doesn't know how much she gives me,
But I vow to live because she loves me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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April 24, 2011 at 1:23 PM
William ;-) CONGRATULATIONS!! on your poem being featured this week, hope your enjoying your Easter Sunday. Take care and have a nice one,..p.d
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April 20, 2011 at 8:55 PM
Congrats Will on your featured poem this week on P.S. a great one to share with us all my friend with luv.. Happy Easter luv..
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April 20, 2011 at 2:39 AM
great poem I thoroughly enjoyed ! I loved the composition...magnificent
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April 19, 2011 at 12:02 PM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week William. Love, Carol
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April 18, 2011 at 1:05 PM
Well said, Will. This beauty, I will fav! Congratulations on being featured this week on Soup. Yes, live because she loves you. What better gift to give your love one! Have a blessed holy week. God bless. Love, Audrey
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April 18, 2011 at 12:23 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, William
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October 13, 2010 at 8:01 PM
william, this was a beautiful piece! how have i never come to comment on it! i was looking through some of my poetry and saw all of your wonderful comments and i apologize for not having come to look through more of your stuff! this poem was so amazing, and powerful. a great piece and well penned. thank you for this, one for my faves for sure. you live in utah? --Madison
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June 21, 2010 at 6:52 AM
Congratulations on your win in Andrea Dietrich's contest "Etheree Me" William. Love, Carol
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June 21, 2010 at 12:57 AM
This is just inspiring, William :) --congrats on your win with this etheree :) --nikko :)
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June 20, 2010 at 7:02 PM
I love this! Love is life and life is love. Congratulations on your success in the contest. Blessings, Joseph
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June 20, 2010 at 12:18 PM
What a wonderful view. Blessings to you for sharing it with us. Enjoy your success. I wish you many more. Karen
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June 20, 2010 at 7:31 AM
congratulations William. This is beautiful and leaves one wondering. Love, Joyce
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June 20, 2010 at 3:46 AM
Congratulations, WIlliam, on your fifth place. I LOVED this one. I wished you had not put a comma after every line, but other than that, I think you had one of the most profound messages of all the etheree that I saw in my contest. Luv, Andrea
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June 11, 2010 at 10:21 AM
Nice- feels very lonely...
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June 11, 2010 at 4:02 AM
Great tribute poem to one you love and one who loves you or maybe someone you know..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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