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Seeing You

with so many years behind us
I expected the typical
oh what a lovely surprise
how nice to see you

but like a dart to my heart
in an instant
the tables turning
our eyes met

I was startled to see
your heart unguarded
skipping a beat
undeniably
blatantly
giving you away

there was no room
for misinterpretation
what I saw when your jaw dropped
was a be-still-my-heart moment

your eyes betraying you
that moment to catch your breath

I understood
you loved me
never told me

so many years
so long ago



Read on air by invitation  ~  August 4, 2021  'WORDS & MUSIC"

AP: 1st place 2021, 1st place 2021

Posted on March 21, 2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021


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Date: 3/21/2021 5:02:00 PM
An unguarded heart in good taste can be a beautiful thing.
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Date: 3/21/2021 8:28:00 PM
So true, Kim ~
Date: 3/21/2021 4:52:00 PM
Ah, a lovely piece, Line. I suspect this scene is repeated many times at high school reunions. Unspoken words are revealed through betraying eyes. Nice.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/21/2021 8:29:00 PM
You are right, I'm sure ~
Date: 3/21/2021 2:44:00 PM
Those sweet, loving looks express the unspoken words some could not say.... beautiful poem...
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Date: 3/21/2021 4:20:00 PM
Thank you very much, Marilene ~
Date: 3/21/2021 2:27:00 PM
I had a "be-still-my-heart moment" the first time I saw my late husband. It took a while to acknowledge love. We should never hesitate to express our feelings, Line. Excellent poetry! Hugs, Carolyn
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/21/2021 4:20:00 PM
Thank you very much, Carolyn ~
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