Richard Lamoureux Poet Than-Bauk

Seeing What I Want To Human Folly

Like a warm breeze
She can please me
and tease my heart

Yes, from the start
Her strange art was
two part told lies

Pool like in size
When she tries to
those eyes can fool



Than-bauk Contest

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Freddie Robinson Jr. October 22, 2016 at 11:49 PM Very masterfully written poem, Richard. Stylistically exceptional love poem. I really adored this than-bauk write. Much love to you. RW

Sara Kendrick March 16, 2016 at 7:42 AM Than-Bauk written in style..Congrats on your winner..Sara Richard Lamoureux March 16, 2016 at 7:59 AM Thanks Sarah.

Poet Destroyer A March 15, 2016 at 5:47 PM Richard, Congrats on your win in "Marugu MO's contest." Wuv ~LINDA~ Richard Lamoureux March 16, 2016 at 12:08 AM Thanks Linda. Hugs Rick.

Andrea Dietrich March 13, 2016 at 7:10 PM I really liked your set, Richard. Congrats in the contest. Richard Lamoureux March 13, 2016 at 7:22 PM Thanks Andrea.

Vladislav Raven March 11, 2016 at 8:11 AM Hi Richard, up to your usual high standard. I enjoyed the read Richard, following your words in thought. Congratulations on your placement in the contest....Vlad. Richard Lamoureux March 13, 2016 at 7:23 PM Thanks Vlad.

Funom Makama March 5, 2016 at 11:13 AM Wonderful! Wonderful! So so so wonderful.... Richard Lamoureux March 13, 2016 at 7:23 PM Thanks Funom.

Constance La France February 29, 2016 at 9:01 AM Richard, this is a very difficult form, so limited but you did it perfect and beautifully, of course, I love it 7 ~ Richard Lamoureux February 29, 2016 at 9:04 AM Thanks Constance.

Red Fiery February 26, 2016 at 2:50 AM Very powerful and well crafted work ! I will be back with more poems...I feel a bit inspired these days..:) Richard Lamoureux February 26, 2016 at 9:12 AM Excellent, let me know when you post them.:0)

Timothy Hicks February 25, 2016 at 10:49 PM Excellent results from a finicky form. Women are powerful in that they can be your greatest companion or cause you the greatest turmoil. You have no need to worry though ... you have a good eye, and see what's really there. Richard Lamoureux February 25, 2016 at 11:53 PM Thanks Timothy, I think I made an excellent choice.

Andrea Dietrich February 25, 2016 at 9:07 PM OH Yes, you GOT this form to a tee. WeLL done. Loved that last image. Richard Lamoureux February 25, 2016 at 11:54 PM Thanks Andrea, I struggled a bit with this one.

Paul Callus February 25, 2016 at 10:42 AM Well done, Richard....you tackled this tricky form with confidence and meaningful content. gl in the contest. // paul Richard Lamoureux February 25, 2016 at 6:24 PM Thanks, a bit of luck never hurts.

Emile Pinet February 25, 2016 at 10:15 AM Your words are simple, yet so strong and layered with emotion. Emile. Richard Lamoureux February 25, 2016 at 10:20 AM Thanks Emile.

Eileen Manassian February 25, 2016 at 9:14 AM Leaves one wanting to know more....Two part told lies....I've never written in this form. Good luck in the contest...soupmail Eileen Manassian February 25, 2016 at 9:53 AM You got my back...I got yours! ;) Richard Lamoureux February 25, 2016 at 9:19 AM Thanks for the heads up on my error. Hugs Rick. This form was harder than I suspected.