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my right hand not in your hand right our wavelength differ as waves height yet we both are moving by seeing way in others eye heart beating as in love at first sight ---------------------------------------------------------------- Photo Reference – ps_JT76955 By Hitendra Mehta March 2011 ----------------------------------------------------------------- Placed 9th in Members contest –“ LoveLand Limerick ” Sponsored by - Linda-Marie The Sweetheart of P.S. -----------------------------------------------------------------

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Date: 4/14/2011 10:22:00 AM
Excellent limerick, Hitendra. Congratulations on your win! Frankly, I'm not one who usually looks at the "form" description when judging. "I don't know" is fine with me, but some judges want the form specified. Hope you win the sijo contest! Such a unique approach. Mind was different too, but most people described the picture, not what they got from it as you did! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/12/2011 8:44:00 PM
a good write.
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Date: 4/11/2011 9:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this wonderful write. I enjoyed the read. Caryl
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Date: 4/11/2011 6:28:00 AM
wonderful Hitendra, love your sentiment here, conrats. Harry
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Date: 4/11/2011 5:20:00 AM
Congrats on your win!
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Date: 4/11/2011 4:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Hitendra in Linda-Marie's contest "Loveland Limerick". Love, Carol
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Date: 4/10/2011 11:06:00 PM
Beautiful Hitendra. many congrats.
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Date: 4/10/2011 8:03:00 PM
congrats for winning real well, hitendra.. : )huggs, nette
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Date: 4/10/2011 2:40:00 PM
Congratulations, Hitendra on your win. How have you been doing?
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Date: 4/10/2011 1:33:00 PM
Congratulations on the ninth place win in the contest, Hitendra
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Date: 4/10/2011 11:19:00 AM
A very interesting write here..Congratulations on your win ..Gautami
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Date: 4/10/2011 11:15:00 AM
Wonderful entry Hitendra-- how cool that despite the differences, love overcomes it :) Congrats on your win :)
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Date: 4/10/2011 10:35:00 AM
great to see you on the winning list Hitendra with this very diffrent piece.
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Date: 4/10/2011 10:28:00 AM
Good to see your poem in the top 9, Hitendra, Congratulations on your honored 9th place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/10/2011 8:06:00 AM
Congrats Hitendra on your success in my contest with this unique entry luv.. thankxx for supporting my contests always ...
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Date: 4/2/2011 12:03:00 AM
so warm in tone, hitendra... winning wishes to you! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 4/2/2011 12:02:00 AM
so warm in tone, hitendra... winning wishes to you! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 3/30/2011 1:07:00 AM
Like this interpretation, excellent limerick. Harry
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Date: 3/29/2011 5:45:00 PM
Nice read of the photo with spicy sprinkle, Hitendra
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Date: 3/29/2011 2:46:00 PM
Love at first sight is often based exclusively on physical attraction, Hitendra. If you're not thinking along the same "wavelength," you won't be holding hands for long. Awesome, insightful entry for the limerick contest. Best wishes for success! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/26/2011 1:02:00 PM
A fine entry that Im sure will make Linda smile ...always Michael
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