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Seeing Way In Others Eye

my right hand not in your hand right   
our wavelength differ as waves height 
yet we both are moving by 
seeing way in others eye 
heart beating as in love at first sight


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Photo Reference – ps_JT76955
By Hitendra Mehta
March  2011

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Placed 9th in Members contest –“ LoveLand Limerick ” 
Sponsored by  - Linda-Marie The Sweetheart of P.S.

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Carolyn Devonshire Date: 4/14/2011 10:22:00 AM Excellent limerick, Hitendra. Congratulations on your win! Frankly, I'm not one who usually looks at the "form" description when judging. "I don't know" is fine with me, but some judges want the form specified. Hope you win the sijo contest! Such a unique approach. Mind was different too, but most people described the picture, not what they got from it as you did! Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

James Foulk Date: 4/12/2011 8:44:00 PM a good write. Login to Reply

Caryl Muzzey Date: 4/11/2011 9:26:00 AM Congratulations on your win with this wonderful write. I enjoyed the read. Caryl Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 4/11/2011 6:28:00 AM wonderful Hitendra, love your sentiment here, conrats. Harry Login to Reply

Black Eyed Susan Date: 4/11/2011 5:20:00 AM Congrats on your win! Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 4/11/2011 4:49:00 AM Congratulations on your win Hitendra in Linda-Marie's contest "Loveland Limerick". Love, Carol Login to Reply

Tahera Mannan Date: 4/10/2011 11:06:00 PM Beautiful Hitendra. many congrats. Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 4/10/2011 8:03:00 PM congrats for winning real well, hitendra.. : )huggs, nette Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/10/2011 2:40:00 PM Congratulations, Hitendra on your win. How have you been doing? Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 4/10/2011 1:33:00 PM Congratulations on the ninth place win in the contest, Hitendra Login to Reply

Gautami Phookan Date: 4/10/2011 11:19:00 AM A very interesting write here..Congratulations on your win ..Gautami Login to Reply

Kabuteng P.Ink K. Date: 4/10/2011 11:15:00 AM Wonderful entry Hitendra-- how cool that despite the differences, love overcomes it :) Congrats on your win :) Login to Reply

Joe Maverick Date: 4/10/2011 10:35:00 AM great to see you on the winning list Hitendra with this very diffrent piece. Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 4/10/2011 10:28:00 AM Good to see your poem in the top 9, Hitendra, Congratulations on your honored 9th place. Agape, Moses Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 4/10/2011 8:06:00 AM Congrats Hitendra on your success in my contest with this unique entry luv.. thankxx for supporting my contests always ... Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 4/2/2011 12:03:00 AM so warm in tone, hitendra... winning wishes to you! :) huggs, nette Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 4/2/2011 12:02:00 AM so warm in tone, hitendra... winning wishes to you! :) huggs, nette Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 3/30/2011 1:07:00 AM Like this interpretation, excellent limerick. Harry Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 3/29/2011 5:45:00 PM Nice read of the photo with spicy sprinkle, Hitendra Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 3/29/2011 2:46:00 PM Love at first sight is often based exclusively on physical attraction, Hitendra. If you're not thinking along the same "wavelength," you won't be holding hands for long. Awesome, insightful entry for the limerick contest. Best wishes for success! Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Michael J. Falotico Date: 3/26/2011 1:02:00 PM A fine entry that Im sure will make Linda smile ...always Michael Login to Reply