Dr Hitendra Mehta Poet Limerick

Seeing Way In Others Eye

my right hand not in your hand right   
our wavelength differ as waves height 
yet we both are moving by 
seeing way in others eye 
heart beating as in love at first sight


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Photo Reference – ps_JT76955
By Hitendra Mehta
March  2011

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Placed 9th in Members contest –“ LoveLand Limerick ” 
Sponsored by  - Linda-Marie The Sweetheart of P.S.

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Carolyn Devonshire April 14, 2011 at 10:22 AM Excellent limerick, Hitendra. Congratulations on your win! Frankly, I'm not one who usually looks at the "form" description when judging. "I don't know" is fine with me, but some judges want the form specified. Hope you win the sijo contest! Such a unique approach. Mind was different too, but most people described the picture, not what they got from it as you did! Love, Carolyn

James Foulk April 12, 2011 at 8:44 PM a good write.

Caryl Muzzey April 11, 2011 at 9:26 AM Congratulations on your win with this wonderful write. I enjoyed the read. Caryl

Harry Horsman April 11, 2011 at 6:28 AM wonderful Hitendra, love your sentiment here, conrats. Harry

Black Eyed Susan April 11, 2011 at 5:20 AM Congrats on your win!

Carol Sunshine Brown April 11, 2011 at 4:49 AM Congratulations on your win Hitendra in Linda-Marie's contest "Loveland Limerick". Love, Carol

Tahera Mannan April 10, 2011 at 11:06 PM Beautiful Hitendra. many congrats.

Nette Onclaud April 10, 2011 at 8:03 PM congrats for winning real well, hitendra.. : )huggs, nette

Andrea Dietrich April 10, 2011 at 2:40 PM Congratulations, Hitendra on your win. How have you been doing?

Dr.Ram Mehta April 10, 2011 at 1:33 PM Congratulations on the ninth place win in the contest, Hitendra

Gautami Phookan April 10, 2011 at 11:19 AM A very interesting write here..Congratulations on your win ..Gautami

Kabuteng P.Ink K. April 10, 2011 at 11:15 AM Wonderful entry Hitendra-- how cool that despite the differences, love overcomes it :) Congrats on your win :)

Joe Maverick April 10, 2011 at 10:35 AM great to see you on the winning list Hitendra with this very diffrent piece.

John Freeman April 10, 2011 at 10:28 AM Good to see your poem in the top 9, Hitendra, Congratulations on your honored 9th place. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 10, 2011 at 8:06 AM Congrats Hitendra on your success in my contest with this unique entry luv.. thankxx for supporting my contests always ...

Nette Onclaud April 2, 2011 at 12:03 AM so warm in tone, hitendra... winning wishes to you! :) huggs, nette

Nette Onclaud April 2, 2011 at 12:02 AM so warm in tone, hitendra... winning wishes to you! :) huggs, nette

Harry Horsman March 30, 2011 at 1:07 AM Like this interpretation, excellent limerick. Harry

Dr.Ram Mehta March 29, 2011 at 5:45 PM Nice read of the photo with spicy sprinkle, Hitendra

Carolyn Devonshire March 29, 2011 at 2:46 PM Love at first sight is often based exclusively on physical attraction, Hitendra. If you're not thinking along the same "wavelength," you won't be holding hands for long. Awesome, insightful entry for the limerick contest. Best wishes for success! Love, Carolyn

Michael J. Falotico March 26, 2011 at 1:02 PM A fine entry that Im sure will make Linda smile ...always Michael