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Seeing the Light

Seeing the light Is always the worst part Because it makes the lungs breathe And it revives the heart It makes your brain Start to run And forces your hand To let go of the gun but then the light starts to fade And your happiness starts to go Yet you want to hold on For just one more show You buy yourself An extra hour Before your own mind Begins to devour The life you imagines For yourself and others Picturing your own suicide Which will kill your mothers And then with nothing left to say You take your last breath And your mind thinks to itself "You have forced your own death"

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Date: 5/25/2017 2:05:00 PM
Lucy, I'd have to agree with Darren, I feel the desperation and the darkness that must be crowding over your mind that just screams from your poetry. Depression is real, and as much as I'd love to pretend it's not a part of my life, it is, and if we don't seek help it can consume us. I've been here.. it sucks for lack of a more poetic word. Welcome to poetrysoup, my friend, and I hope you stay long enough to realize what a great community you've joined. Love, Juli-Michelle
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