Seeing Spots

Spots on its skin The leopard grins Spots on your skin ~ Call next-of-kin

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Bill Baker

Date: 10/19/2022 10:46:00 AM

Spots can be troublesome until you realize you're getting more all the time, don't care ... just aging spots. Bill

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 10/17/2022 8:10:00 AM

Age spots, sun spots, spots before my eyes. All point toward my forthcoming demise. LOL

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/19/2022 5:51:00 PM

Oh, no! Linda, you gotta stick around!!

Pashang Salehi

Date: 10/14/2022 10:49:00 PM

Are you talking about acne or old age spots... the second one you cannot get rid of... LOL

Michael Tor

Date: 10/13/2022 11:33:00 PM

Lol funny funny funny. I once had a neighbor with spots. I brought my eraser over to his house and cured him lol...

Becky Forbes

Date: 10/13/2022 8:52:00 PM

OMG! Good one... made me giggle. :-)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/13/2022 11:00:00 PM

Ha,ha! GIGO only applied to computers back then... although Redd Fox once told Howard Cosell this: 'Howard, they say you are what you eat. Well, you must be eating garbage!' Nice fellow that Redd Fox; vulgar too!... And yes. I'm SURE you can teach me plenty of stuff. After all the biggest room in the world is the room for improvement! :)

Becky Forbes
Date: 10/13/2022 9:01:00 PM

On the other hand... there are telltale spots that pronounce themselves as the cause of demise. Certain bacterial meningitis or a pulmonary embolism, for example... Now I can teach you something!

Becky Forbes
Date: 10/13/2022 9:00:00 PM

Wait... you're saying you eat garbage??

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/13/2022 8:55:00 PM

Remember 'GIGO? 'Garbage In, Garbage Out,' as it applied to those old Hollerith punch-cards inserted into a computer back in the '60's? Well, that's nice. lol. Giggle!