Seeing Red

shifting shades of green
               kinglets flitting in the trees
                    ruby crests flashing




12/07/2019
A Nature Themed Haiku Poetry Contest
Sponsor Tania Kitchin
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Date: 4/29/2020 6:09:00 AM
Gorgeously done; I see why it was a top dog winner.
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 4/29/2020 8:03:00 AM
Forgot about this one! I haven't seen one yet this year, but I hear them!!!! I love then soooo much <3 Thank you Lovely! xomo
Date: 1/2/2020 4:43:00 AM
Amazing nature. Well penned, Kai
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Date: 12/23/2019 1:48:00 PM
Love the imagery. Since I saw this in the here and now I feel and see Christmas colors off my bow. I hope you have a Wonderful Christmas.
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Date: 12/17/2019 12:43:00 PM
I'm twitching all over this one . . . ; )
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Date: 12/13/2019 5:17:00 AM
Shade of beauty my dear... lovely written... salute alkas
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/13/2019 7:18:00 AM
Thank you Alkas, hugs xomo
Date: 12/12/2019 6:53:00 PM
this is so very pretty, Maureen. Congrats on a great win
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/13/2019 7:19:00 AM
Thank you Andrea, 'seasons best to you! xomo
Date: 12/12/2019 9:44:00 AM
And what a lovely shade of red for the birdwatcher!
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/13/2019 7:20:00 AM
My favourite red to date ;), Hugs! xomo
Date: 12/11/2019 10:23:00 AM
Very nice
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/13/2019 7:21:00 AM
Thank you Peter :) xomo
Date: 12/10/2019 8:12:00 AM
What a nicely decorated tree Mo.
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/13/2019 7:24:00 AM
A few years ago I actually made ruby crowned kinglet Christmas tree decorations. I forgot about that, they are no doubt decorating trees right now, a lovely thought, thank you! xomo
Date: 12/10/2019 6:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win, Maureen...
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/13/2019 7:25:00 AM
Thank you Supraja, xomo
Date: 12/10/2019 12:30:00 AM
Congrats on your winning poem Maureen
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/13/2019 7:26:00 AM
Thank you Greg, xomo
Date: 12/9/2019 11:15:00 PM
Lovely alliteration and beautiful picture. Congrats!
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Date: 12/9/2019 9:12:00 PM
Congrats on your podium finish, Maureen. Well done. That's the kind of red I like to see.
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/12/2019 7:48:00 AM
It's my favourite red ;), Hugs and Thank you! xomo
Date: 12/9/2019 8:16:00 PM
Congratulations Maureen on your winning placement with your beautiful haiku, stunning imagery!
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/12/2019 7:48:00 AM
Thank you so much Tania! My muse needed a ku prompt ;)))) xomo!
Date: 12/9/2019 3:28:00 PM
The colors of Christmas come alive through your pen, Maureen-
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/13/2019 7:27:00 AM
I can't believe I had not considered that when I wrote it ...lol! ;D, Thank you! Season's extra big hugs! xomo
Date: 12/9/2019 6:22:00 AM
Beautiful imagery that brings Christmas to life dear, Maureen! Hugs xxx
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/9/2019 7:13:00 AM
They are seasonal colours for sure ;), Thank you dear Sweet D, Hugs xomo
Date: 12/8/2019 5:42:00 PM
Very lovely Maureen. I had to look up kinglet first; now I know that they are in the warbler family. Warblers were always so varying in color, but always sweet in their songs. So is this haiku. Thank you.
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/9/2019 7:10:00 AM
I thought I was 'seeing things' the first time I saw them. Blinking red polkadots right in front of me. Just spectacular ;))), Thank you Jeff, xomo
Date: 12/8/2019 3:40:00 PM
I just received a Christmas card with a USPS stamp of a cardinal perched on a fir with snowy-white background. In life, the view can warm your heart, but on a stamp, it just looks bloody cold, so good thing you have words for it! Aloha! Rico
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/9/2019 7:06:00 AM
And today it's raining here, if typical is typical it should freeze up to a nice citywide skating rink tomorrow. Send me a palm tree ~x
Date: 12/8/2019 7:35:00 AM
Splendid imagery--awesome haiku.
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/8/2019 10:24:00 AM
Thank you Vijay! :))) xomo
Date: 12/8/2019 7:09:00 AM
never heard about this bird, thanks for the lesson...
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/8/2019 10:23:00 AM
One of my *favourites* ;), xomo!
Date: 12/8/2019 2:24:00 AM
Lovely! I am going to look up a photo of a kinglet now. I know it must be something more than a bit wonderful!
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/8/2019 10:22:00 AM
The are the cutest!!!! I thought I was seeing things the first time I spied them, red flashes like Christmas lights. Precious! Thank you :))) xomo!
Date: 12/8/2019 12:56:00 AM
Good one.. Best wishes in the contest..
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/8/2019 10:18:00 AM
Thank you Jenish, xomo
Date: 12/7/2019 10:03:00 PM
Very elegant Maureen. Best of luck in the contest. Thanks for sharing
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/8/2019 10:18:00 AM
Thank you Greg :) xomo!
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