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Seeing Red

shifting shades of green kinglets flitting in the trees ruby crests flashing 12/07/2019 A Nature Themed Haiku Poetry Contest Sponsor Tania Kitchin

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/29/2020 6:09:00 AM

Gorgeously done; I see why it was a top dog winner.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/29/2020 8:03:00 AM

Forgot about this one! I haven't seen one yet this year, but I hear them!!!! I love then soooo much <3 Thank you Lovely! xomo

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 1/2/2020 4:43:00 AM

Amazing nature. Well penned, Kai

Bette Bavington

Date: 12/23/2019 1:48:00 PM

Love the imagery. Since I saw this in the here and now I feel and see Christmas colors off my bow. I hope you have a Wonderful Christmas.

Indiana Shaw

Date: 12/17/2019 12:43:00 PM

I'm twitching all over this one . . . ; )

Alkas Poetry

Date: 12/13/2019 5:17:00 AM

Shade of beauty my dear... lovely written... salute alkas

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 12/13/2019 7:18:00 AM

Thank you Alkas, hugs xomo

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/12/2019 6:53:00 PM

this is so very pretty, Maureen. Congrats on a great win

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 12/13/2019 7:19:00 AM

Thank you Andrea, 'seasons best to you! xomo

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/12/2019 9:44:00 AM

And what a lovely shade of red for the birdwatcher!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 12/13/2019 7:20:00 AM

My favourite red to date ;), Hugs! xomo

Peter W Iversen

Date: 12/11/2019 10:23:00 AM

Very nice

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 12/13/2019 7:21:00 AM

Thank you Peter :) xomo

John Lawless

Date: 12/10/2019 8:12:00 AM

What a nicely decorated tree Mo.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 12/13/2019 7:24:00 AM

A few years ago I actually made ruby crowned kinglet Christmas tree decorations. I forgot about that, they are no doubt decorating trees right now, a lovely thought, thank you! xomo

Supraja Kannan

Date: 12/10/2019 6:41:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win, Maureen...

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 12/13/2019 7:25:00 AM

Thank you Supraja, xomo

Na Na

Date: 12/10/2019 12:30:00 AM

Congrats on your winning poem Maureen

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 12/13/2019 7:26:00 AM

Thank you Greg, xomo

Juliet Ligon

Date: 12/9/2019 11:15:00 PM

Lovely alliteration and beautiful picture. Congrats!

Line Gauthier

Date: 12/9/2019 9:12:00 PM

Congrats on your podium finish, Maureen. Well done. That's the kind of red I like to see.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 12/12/2019 7:48:00 AM

It's my favourite red ;), Hugs and Thank you! xomo

Tania Kitchin

Date: 12/9/2019 8:16:00 PM

Congratulations Maureen on your winning placement with your beautiful haiku, stunning imagery!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 12/12/2019 7:48:00 AM

Thank you so much Tania! My muse needed a ku prompt ;)))) xomo!

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 12/9/2019 3:28:00 PM

The colors of Christmas come alive through your pen, Maureen-

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 12/13/2019 7:27:00 AM

I can't believe I had not considered that when I wrote it ...lol! ;D, Thank you! Season's extra big hugs! xomo

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 12/9/2019 6:22:00 AM

Beautiful imagery that brings Christmas to life dear, Maureen! Hugs xxx

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 12/9/2019 7:13:00 AM

They are seasonal colours for sure ;), Thank you dear Sweet D, Hugs xomo

Jeff Connelly

Date: 12/8/2019 5:42:00 PM

Very lovely Maureen. I had to look up kinglet first; now I know that they are in the warbler family. Warblers were always so varying in color, but always sweet in their songs. So is this haiku. Thank you.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 12/9/2019 7:10:00 AM

I thought I was 'seeing things' the first time I saw them. Blinking red polkadots right in front of me. Just spectacular ;))), Thank you Jeff, xomo

Rico Leffanta

Date: 12/8/2019 3:40:00 PM

I just received a Christmas card with a USPS stamp of a cardinal perched on a fir with snowy-white background. In life, the view can warm your heart, but on a stamp, it just looks bloody cold, so good thing you have words for it! Aloha! Rico

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 12/9/2019 7:06:00 AM

And today it's raining here, if typical is typical it should freeze up to a nice citywide skating rink tomorrow. Send me a palm tree ~x