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Seeing Flaws

The Pharisee took up his position and spole his prayer to himself
 “O God
 thank You that I am not like the rest of humanity-greedy
 dishonest, adulterous-or even like His tax collector.” Luke 18:11

  

While visiting my daughter’s home
Llast summer
I noticed that weeds undertaking 
Her luscious flower garden

Although I resisted the impulse 
To mention it to her
I still will judge her a little
Any feelings of superiority I had quickly vanished 

When I watered my yard later
That day and discovered an abundant crop of weeds in my own garden
How easily tempting today on so many levels
Both personal and corporate

I know that it is only when I take time for quiet meditation that I notice where my sincere desire to grow in faith
Hope and love has become tainted with self-righteousness

Terri Mifek
Turned to Poetry: Jac R. M.
Poetry Form: Free Verse

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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