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teeth bared fierce snarled claws sharp deep scarp maw clenched fur drenched eyes aimed she claimed mount tensed head sensed red heat conceit snug haze new ways day's gray like clay harsh frost gas cost weak knees feet freeze night walk knee chock cow-poke now broke brawl play war sway rope toy stop ploy vast flop may drop joy lust no trust clay earth pain birth tides beat pale feet Written: November 27, 2022 A Brian Strand Premiere No 53 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Date: 11/29/2022 10:50:00 AM
Lasaad, congratulations on your win with this footle that runs the gamut of emotions from grayness to freezing feet. So well done. I felt every line. Blessings and a hug my friend!
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Date: 11/29/2022 9:57:00 AM
Nice string of footles Lasaad! Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 11/29/2022 5:37:00 AM
- Well done, Las ... I know footle is not easy - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs
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Date: 11/29/2022 4:33:00 AM
A very grand footle. Congratulations!
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Date: 11/29/2022 4:22:00 AM
Congratulations on this winning work. No so easy to write. Way to go in Brian's contest. Sara
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Date: 11/28/2022 8:33:00 PM
These are footles so masterfully strung together into a beautiful ornament ! All the Best in Brian's Contest dear friend !
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Date: 11/27/2022 12:11:00 PM
A necklace of sparkling diamonds, my dearest, Lasaad. Good luck!
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Date: 11/27/2022 11:04:00 AM
A bouquet of terse verse, some little nicks and hits, and a dart or two. "Day gray/like clay" imagery you not only see, but you can touch and even smell--in four syllables. Skillful indeed!
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Date: 11/27/2022 8:45:00 AM
Highly emotive pairs. Skillfully done in Brian's favorite form. No doubt a winner my friend.
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Book: Shattered Sighs