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A seed falling unto the soil, Would soon learn its own tirelessly Effort to wiggle into its foundation. For, it was tossed to and fro By the mighty winds and rain Until, landing into a field prepared. For something within felt alive A drop of water had seeped through With a touch of warmth from the light. As if a new breath had filled its being The outer shell was becoming weak Of this fight coming from within A little arm one day, finally broke The outer shell to begin to dig. Which would bring a source of life For, the outer shell had busted open. This seed had died, that the embryo Might live and raise unto its purpose. As it started to rise towards the light, Eagerly awaiting from sunrise to sunset. Then, a snag was felt from its arm. What, is this thorn catching on To slow down its own effort There would be many more to come But a little more wisdom and understanding was given each occurrence. That, it would come to seek and know The true source that had been guiding. Growing past the thony patches and thickets, Into a full bloom of beauty To become what its purpose In this life was sown for.

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Date: 2/5/2025 9:17:00 AM
The beauty of how like seeds we have to grow and bloom but along the journey many thorns will prolong our growth. I like the analogy you have used. God bless. love phyl
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Stephan McBride
Date: 2/5/2025 9:22:00 AM
Amen, the Bible is full of different ways trying to explain it to us, May, many receive the seed of the promised inheritance of the Holy Spirit to be raised into the likeness of Christ <3
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Stephan McBride
Date: 2/5/2025 9:20:00 AM
May, God, bless, comfort, guide and fill you with peace, Joy, love and overflowing of the Holy Spirit : )have a great day in the presence of the Living God , great to hear from you
Date: 2/2/2025 8:14:00 AM
What a lovely write you have here. Pretty rose picture. Have a wonderful/blessed day................
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Stephan McBride
Date: 2/5/2025 9:18:00 AM
May, God, bless, comfort, guide and fill you with peace, Joy, love and overflowing of the Holy Spirit : )have a great day in the presence of the Living God , great to hear from you
Date: 1/24/2025 5:55:00 AM
This is so beautifully written! A great poem Stephan, hope you are keeping well :)
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Stephan McBride
Date: 1/26/2025 5:51:00 PM
May, God, bless, comfort, guide and fill you with peace, Joy, love and overflowing of the Holy Spirit : )have a great day in the presence of the Living God , great to hear from you : )
Date: 1/20/2025 1:52:00 PM
The beauty is in the endurance. Gorgeous piece here, Stephan. ~Laura
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Stephan McBride
Date: 1/21/2025 8:56:00 AM
May, God, bless, comfort, guide and fill you with peace, Joy, love and overflowing of the Holy Spirit : )have a great day in the presence of the Living God , great to hear from you,
Date: 1/19/2025 11:21:00 PM
A metaphor for life as well. Really nice
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Stephan McBride
Date: 1/21/2025 8:59:00 AM
May, God, bless, comfort, guide and fill you with peace, Joy, love and overflowing of the Holy Spirit : )have a great day in the presence of the Living God , great to hear from you
Date: 1/19/2025 9:51:00 PM
A seed that is sown, finally finds a congenial ground to lie. When a drop of water or moisture touches, the dormant life within it wakes and it sprouts. Sustained by water and light, it grows and branches. Sometimes thorns and weeds may obstruct its growth. But it manages to grow and bloom and serve its purpose. A beautiful analogy of a soul fulfilling its purpose as devised by God. A lovely and meaningful poem, dear Stephan.
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Stephan McBride
Date: 1/21/2025 9:00:00 AM
May, God, bless, comfort, guide and fill you with peace, Joy, love and overflowing of the Holy Spirit : )have a great day in the presence of the Living God , great to hear from you

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