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See You In Heaven

It has been almost three years since to heaven you did fly We miss the beauty of your soul now you share it with the sky... Heaven now knows the warmth of your heart So bright you put the stars to shame the glow of Springtime's sun will never be the same... Our son has the strength of your soul the passion of your heart with much to share in his eyes your majesty of the cosmos like you a love of animals with much to spare... My love add your wonder to the stars enhance the blue of the midday sky we miss the unequaled shining light and the tenderness in your eyes... Soar all the way to heaven my lady for eternal love has set you free I await here among the living for you to greet me in heaven splendidly.. ~ ~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/21/2014 7:03:00 PM
A very eloquent write for your love. The first verse grabbed me as I choked back tears the entire way through. Going into my faves. Just love this!
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Ken Carroll
Date: 4/21/2014 7:15:00 PM
Thank you Karen!
Date: 4/20/2014 10:45:00 PM
So beautiful Ken. A special poem for a special Lady. Thanks for sharing . These are words from the soul... Luciulla
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Date: 4/20/2014 11:18:00 PM
Hola Lucilla, Gracis por leer!
Date: 4/20/2014 10:04:00 PM
Oh! Ken how beautiful is that poem, she must have been so special in your life, just think she is at peace waiting to be reunited with you once again, do keep writing as your writes are so lovely...........Vera.............
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Ken Carroll
Date: 4/20/2014 10:14:00 PM
Thank you for the kindest comment Vera!
Date: 4/20/2014 5:31:00 PM
Ahh!! I feel the warmth of love and longing in this one that greatly honors someone that you love dearly..I hope the loss hasn't been too recent..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Ken Carroll
Date: 4/20/2014 10:13:00 PM
Thank you Sara!
Date: 4/20/2014 2:23:00 PM
You managed to write about such a loss with great finesse. I really like it very much. One small suggestion..perhaps lose the "so" in the last line, for some reason it doesn't flow as well as it might. I think you have talent my friend! BG
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Ken Carroll
Date: 4/20/2014 2:32:00 PM
Thank you Barbara for the visit and constructive suggestion..
Date: 4/20/2014 1:38:00 PM
- Ken, heartbreaking and beautiful - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Ken Carroll
Date: 4/20/2014 2:31:00 PM
Thank you Anne!
Date: 4/20/2014 12:37:00 PM
wow, this is a special poem. Sad and yet so hopeful. Happy Easter to you, my friend.
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Ken Carroll
Date: 4/20/2014 2:31:00 PM
Thank you Andrea!

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