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See the Sea, She Saw

See the sea, she saw,
While rocking on the sea-saw sea.
See what she saw splashing and sparkling,
Glinting and glimmering with glee,
Kissed by the sun, caressed by the sea.
Oh what delights are the sights
she saw on the seashore sea!

Hop on the see-saw 
to see the sea she saw!

Hop on the see-saw 
to see the sea she saw!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Williams Avatar
October 9, 2024 at 9:34 PM
Hi John, This is a fun take, reminiscent and an alternative on the tongue twister we all learnt. I Love it - Maria
Rodgers Avatar
October 9, 2024 at 8:00 AM
Hello John, What great alliterations and just plain fun to read and enjoy. Autumn Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
Anderson Avatar
October 8, 2024 at 1:21 PM
Thanks for your kind words. Best Wishes. Cheers
Rodrigues Avatar
October 8, 2024 at 12:00 PM
Just wonderful, John! Playful and a bit sensuous.
Lawless Avatar
October 8, 2024 at 11:56 AM
has anyone seen my saw
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