Gregory Richard Barden Poet Rhyme

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Three blind mices

               Clock hands, stick

Small furry fices

               Their poops, thick ...



Could their feces

               Cling, quite fixed

Maybe those meces

               Catch necks ... nixed.

                            ;-)




* Written and submitted on March 22, 2018, for the "A Little Laughter Five" Poetry Contest, Edward McCall, Sponsor. *

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Susan Gentry March 27, 2018 at 9:28 PM Congratulations on your win with this different and funny 5-word poem. Gregory Richard Barden March 27, 2018 at 9:55 PM Thank you, Susan ... yes, this is certainly "different", and I was in an odd mood when I wrote it, lol. Blessings, my friend! :-) <3

Jan Allison March 26, 2018 at 4:29 PM I'll be losing the poop crown to you Greg lol congrats:-) hugs jan xx Gregory Richard Barden March 26, 2018 at 5:35 PM lol - I'm not sure how to take that, Jan ... sounds like one crown that might not be so much fun to wear, haha! But ANYthing that comes from YOU, is wholly worthwhile! Blessings and thanks to you, Dear Friend! :-) <3

Gershon Wolf March 26, 2018 at 10:53 AM Delightful!...Methinks Bullwinkle would have roared at this one too...Congrats, my friend. Best regards, Gershon Gregory Richard Barden March 26, 2018 at 5:33 PM Ha - that would indeed be the ultimate nod of approval, (and I imagine Rocky would have given him some flack for it, lol) ... blessings and thanks, my good friend! :-)

Eve Roper March 26, 2018 at 7:29 AM Greg, congratulations on your win on this great piece! :) Hugs Eve Gregory Richard Barden March 26, 2018 at 5:31 PM Thank you very much, Eve - blessings! :-) <3

Line Gauthier March 25, 2018 at 10:04 PM Congrats, Gregory. Interesting choice of five-letter words. Gregory Richard Barden March 26, 2018 at 5:31 PM Thanks so much, Line - yeah, interesting is a good description, lol ... this one had an odd life of its own! ;-) <3

Anne-Lise Andresen March 25, 2018 at 1:19 PM :))) - Congratulations so much with your fun winning poem, Greg :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Gregory Richard Barden March 26, 2018 at 5:30 PM Very kind of you, Anne-Lise - I'm pleased that it made you smile! :-) <3

Edward Mccall March 25, 2018 at 10:26 AM Good morning Greg how are you today? any poem that includes three blind mice is bound to be fun. Congratulations on your win and thank you for entering the contest have a great day. Edward. {:-) Gregory Richard Barden March 26, 2018 at 5:29 PM Thank you so very kindly, Edward, I am honored to be placed so high and humbled to be on a list with such wonderful poets! Many blessings to you, my friend - this was a joy! :-)

Andrea Dietrich March 22, 2018 at 8:08 PM OMG, You have joined Jan by producing a poop poem. hahaha. I am not even attempting this contest!! Gregory Richard Barden March 23, 2018 at 1:28 AM LOL - Yeah, I wasn't going to, but I decided to take a stab at it, and it was really quite hard. Blessings, friend - I'll have to read Jan's poop poem, too! :-)

Winged Warrior March 22, 2018 at 7:40 PM He, He, He, ...I love the three blind mice...only because they are blinder than me lol...great funny piece Greg...stay in the light my friend...^WW^ Gregory Richard Barden March 23, 2018 at 1:27 AM Thanks so much, my friend - glad you got a kick out of it! :-)

Sanjay Karmakar March 22, 2018 at 6:27 AM So nice the poem is. Gregory Richard Barden March 23, 2018 at 1:26 AM Thank you, Sanjay! :-)

Sanjay Karmakar March 22, 2018 at 6:27 AM So nice the poem is. Gregory Richard Barden March 23, 2018 at 1:26 AM Thank you, Sanjay! :-)