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Three blind mices

               Clock hands, stick

Small furry fices

               Their poops, thick ...



Could their feces

               Cling, quite fixed

Maybe those meces

               Catch necks ... nixed.

                            ;-)




* Written and submitted on March 22, 2018, for the "A Little Laughter Five" Poetry Contest, Edward McCall, Sponsor. *

Copyright © Gregory Richard Barden | Year Posted 2018

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Susan Gentry Date: 3/27/2018 9:28:00 PM Congratulations on your win with this different and funny 5-word poem. Login to Reply Gregory Richard Barden Date: 3/27/2018 9:55:00 PM Thank you, Susan ... yes, this is certainly "different", and I was in an odd mood when I wrote it, lol. Blessings, my friend! :-) <3

Jan Allison Date: 3/26/2018 4:29:00 PM I'll be losing the poop crown to you Greg lol congrats:-) hugs jan xx Login to Reply Gregory Richard Barden Date: 3/26/2018 5:35:00 PM lol - I'm not sure how to take that, Jan ... sounds like one crown that might not be so much fun to wear, haha! But ANYthing that comes from YOU, is wholly worthwhile! Blessings and thanks to you, Dear Friend! :-) <3

Gershon Wolf Date: 3/26/2018 10:53:00 AM Delightful!...Methinks Bullwinkle would have roared at this one too...Congrats, my friend. Best regards, Gershon Login to Reply Gregory Richard Barden Date: 3/26/2018 5:33:00 PM Ha - that would indeed be the ultimate nod of approval, (and I imagine Rocky would have given him some flack for it, lol) ... blessings and thanks, my good friend! :-)

Eve Roper Date: 3/26/2018 7:29:00 AM Greg, congratulations on your win on this great piece! :) Hugs Eve Login to Reply Gregory Richard Barden Date: 3/26/2018 5:31:00 PM Thank you very much, Eve - blessings! :-) <3

Line Gauthier Date: 3/25/2018 10:04:00 PM Congrats, Gregory. Interesting choice of five-letter words. Login to Reply Gregory Richard Barden Date: 3/26/2018 5:31:00 PM Thanks so much, Line - yeah, interesting is a good description, lol ... this one had an odd life of its own! ;-) <3

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/25/2018 1:19:00 PM :))) - Congratulations so much with your fun winning poem, Greg :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Gregory Richard Barden Date: 3/26/2018 5:30:00 PM Very kind of you, Anne-Lise - I'm pleased that it made you smile! :-) <3

Edward Mccall Date: 3/25/2018 10:26:00 AM Good morning Greg how are you today? any poem that includes three blind mice is bound to be fun. Congratulations on your win and thank you for entering the contest have a great day. Edward. {:-) Login to Reply Gregory Richard Barden Date: 3/26/2018 5:29:00 PM Thank you so very kindly, Edward, I am honored to be placed so high and humbled to be on a list with such wonderful poets! Many blessings to you, my friend - this was a joy! :-)

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/22/2018 8:08:00 PM OMG, You have joined Jan by producing a poop poem. hahaha. I am not even attempting this contest!! Login to Reply Gregory Richard Barden Date: 3/23/2018 1:28:00 AM LOL - Yeah, I wasn't going to, but I decided to take a stab at it, and it was really quite hard. Blessings, friend - I'll have to read Jan's poop poem, too! :-)

Winged Warrior Date: 3/22/2018 7:40:00 PM He, He, He, ...I love the three blind mice...only because they are blinder than me lol...great funny piece Greg...stay in the light my friend...^WW^ Login to Reply Gregory Richard Barden Date: 3/23/2018 1:27:00 AM Thanks so much, my friend - glad you got a kick out of it! :-)

Sanjay Karmakar Date: 3/22/2018 6:27:00 AM So nice the poem is. Login to Reply Gregory Richard Barden Date: 3/23/2018 1:26:00 AM Thank you, Sanjay! :-)

Sanjay Karmakar Date: 3/22/2018 6:27:00 AM So nice the poem is. Login to Reply Gregory Richard Barden Date: 3/23/2018 1:26:00 AM Thank you, Sanjay! :-)