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Three blind mices Clock hands, stick Small furry fices Their poops, thick ... Could their feces Cling, quite fixed Maybe those meces Catch necks ... nixed. ;-) * Written and submitted on March 22, 2018, for the "A Little Laughter Five" Poetry Contest, Edward McCall, Sponsor. *

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Susan Gentry

Date: 3/27/2018 9:28:00 PM

Congratulations on your win with this different and funny 5-word poem.

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/27/2018 9:55:00 PM

Thank you, Susan ... yes, this is certainly "different", and I was in an odd mood when I wrote it, lol. Blessings, my friend! :-) <3

Jan Allison

Date: 3/26/2018 4:29:00 PM

I'll be losing the poop crown to you Greg lol congrats:-) hugs jan xx

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/26/2018 5:35:00 PM

lol - I'm not sure how to take that, Jan ... sounds like one crown that might not be so much fun to wear, haha! But ANYthing that comes from YOU, is wholly worthwhile! Blessings and thanks to you, Dear Friend! :-) <3

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/26/2018 10:53:00 AM

Delightful!...Methinks Bullwinkle would have roared at this one too...Congrats, my friend. Best regards, Gershon

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/26/2018 5:33:00 PM

Ha - that would indeed be the ultimate nod of approval, (and I imagine Rocky would have given him some flack for it, lol) ... blessings and thanks, my good friend! :-)

Eve Roper

Date: 3/26/2018 7:29:00 AM

Greg, congratulations on your win on this great piece! :) Hugs Eve

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/26/2018 5:31:00 PM

Thank you very much, Eve - blessings! :-) <3

Line Gauthier

Date: 3/25/2018 10:04:00 PM

Congrats, Gregory. Interesting choice of five-letter words.

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/26/2018 5:31:00 PM

Thanks so much, Line - yeah, interesting is a good description, lol ... this one had an odd life of its own! ;-) <3

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/25/2018 1:19:00 PM

:))) - Congratulations so much with your fun winning poem, Greg :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/26/2018 5:30:00 PM

Very kind of you, Anne-Lise - I'm pleased that it made you smile! :-) <3

Edward Mccall

Date: 3/25/2018 10:26:00 AM

Good morning Greg how are you today? any poem that includes three blind mice is bound to be fun. Congratulations on your win and thank you for entering the contest have a great day. Edward. {:-)

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/26/2018 5:29:00 PM

Thank you so very kindly, Edward, I am honored to be placed so high and humbled to be on a list with such wonderful poets! Many blessings to you, my friend - this was a joy! :-)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/22/2018 8:08:00 PM

OMG, You have joined Jan by producing a poop poem. hahaha. I am not even attempting this contest!!

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/23/2018 1:28:00 AM

LOL - Yeah, I wasn't going to, but I decided to take a stab at it, and it was really quite hard. Blessings, friend - I'll have to read Jan's poop poem, too! :-)

Winged Warrior

Date: 3/22/2018 7:40:00 PM

He, He, He, ...I love the three blind mice...only because they are blinder than me lol...great funny piece Greg...stay in the light my friend...^WW^

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/23/2018 1:27:00 AM

Thanks so much, my friend - glad you got a kick out of it! :-)

Sanjay Karmakar

Date: 3/22/2018 6:27:00 AM

So nice the poem is.

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/23/2018 1:26:00 AM

Thank you, Sanjay! :-)

Sanjay Karmakar

Date: 3/22/2018 6:27:00 AM

So nice the poem is.

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/23/2018 1:26:00 AM

Thank you, Sanjay! :-)