Richard Lamoureux Poet Rhyme

See

Do you see me splitting at the seams
as I shed the former me
the inner part struggles be free
broken discarded branches from a sinful tree

Do you see
the light that was hidden within
taking me to a place I have never been
reborn of spirit part of a plan I know myself I can begin

Do you see
beyond this infintesimal hour
there is majesty and wonder within His power
approachable and real, not in some ivory tower

I see you splitting at the seams
I am your witness I can see
brother and sister, part of the same tree
we have discovered inner truth now we are free 

We are seen
beyond our imperfections
foolish past sins and indiscretions
burdens left at the cross, He has no recollection

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Felisha Coon May 2, 2014 at 6:16 PM I like this one Richard Lamoureux May 2, 2014 at 6:18 PM Thanks Felisha, I'm pleased you dropped by.

Sara Kendrick April 5, 2014 at 3:05 PM Great work that speaks of your faith in the power of the blood..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Sara Richard Lamoureux April 5, 2014 at 3:52 PM Thanks so much Sara.

Poet Tacito April 5, 2014 at 9:10 AM A fantastic reminder & reflection of what needs to be said. No recollections, indeed! Richard Lamoureux April 5, 2014 at 9:30 AM Good morning and thanks. Off to see if you have posted a new poem.

Monterey Sirak April 5, 2014 at 8:18 AM Simply wonderful. I love the last stanza...seen beyond our imperfections. Richard Lamoureux April 5, 2014 at 8:53 AM Thanks and a big hug.

Jerry T Curtis April 3, 2014 at 7:43 PM Richard, you are a poet and Philosopher Richard Lamoureux April 3, 2014 at 7:53 PM Thankyou Jerry.

Andrea Dietrich April 2, 2014 at 10:44 PM wow, a great reflective poem written in this Easter Season of rebirth, Richard. One of your very nicest poems. Richard Lamoureux April 2, 2014 at 10:51 PM Thanks Andrea.

Eileen Manassian April 2, 2014 at 6:55 PM :-) Wow... the process of being sanctified....You described it so well...bless you Richard Lamoureux April 2, 2014 at 8:28 PM Thanks, on my way to your blog.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 2, 2014 at 5:31 PM i like the "growth or progress" i read in between the lines of the poem.. :) well-penned.. :) ===olive_eloi with a smile and who wants to say thank you for the comments I have received from you.. :) GOd bless you a thousand times.. :) Richard Lamoureux April 2, 2014 at 5:33 PM Thanks, I am happy to recieve blessings. Thanks and a big hug.

Mama Bear April 2, 2014 at 3:18 PM You know and have seen the many faces of God better than anyone I have ever known. I love the way you share your knowledge. You make be proud to be your mother Love you Mamabear Richard Lamoureux April 2, 2014 at 4:53 PM I am proud to be your son so we are even ;0) I love you too!