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Seductive Disarray

I didn't crumble or drift off into a fade...
I shrugged off goodbyes faster then they were made...
Watched as they were dipped and soaked in my poetic rage...
As I threw a fist full of words against a framed blank page...
I sat and watched my emotions scatter artistically...
Like candles on a wall it poured in colors so intensely...
A portrait of a misguided soul that has lost its way...
To a poet who paints with a pen in seductive disarray...

Copyright © Michael J. Falotico | Year Posted 2012

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Karen Harris Date: 2/19/2013 11:57:00 AM VERY NICE !! Login to Reply

Jacob Cra Date: 12/8/2012 1:12:00 PM Wow, this poem is spectacular, by far one of my favorites I have ever read (and I'm not just saying that). Is it published or what? It's really good, and you are extremely talented... I've read some of your other poems as well. You should visit my site: poeticpossibilities.tk ! I think this poem could have a really good chance of winning one of our contests! Wish you the best with your poetry and I hope you get published! : )Jacob Cramer Login to Reply

Eileen Manassian Date: 12/8/2012 12:24:00 PM My favorite line?? As I threw a fist full of words against a framed blank page! Awesome imagery! Great poem! :) Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 12/6/2012 6:09:00 PM very provacative. Light & Love Login to Reply

Yanny Widjanarko Date: 12/3/2012 6:25:00 PM This is really a seductive rhyme Michael, you are really in deep with all of your sense of a poet, I love this one :D Login to Reply

Don Johnson Date: 12/2/2012 2:45:00 PM Good on ya Michael mate, words are tools you demonstrate:) love it, let the great words flow! Login to Reply

Deborah Shepard Date: 12/1/2012 2:06:00 AM Beautifully written, love to light Login to Reply

Shaz Cheesman Date: 11/30/2012 11:24:00 PM Artistry in poetry and theatrical motion here Michael. Nicely done. Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 11/30/2012 2:47:00 PM wow Michael this is truly an excellent poem, both very clever and inspiring... Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 11/30/2012 7:47:00 AM Emotive and expressive work that you have penned..I think that we have all been there and back and probably again..Thanks for stopping by..Sara Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 11/30/2012 7:52:00 AM I am going to fav this one and print it out.. It has given me some ideas..I might give a reply..I just don't know how and when..Sara

Richard Lamoureux Date: 11/30/2012 7:43:00 AM I like the way you have described your emotions here. You are a true poet. I also appreciate your visit and comment. Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 11/29/2012 9:36:00 PM amazing visual imagery with words chosen to express feelings Michael luv .. forever your JG ..xoxo your words always make me soar with a smile .. Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 11/29/2012 8:26:00 PM Hello Michael, the image of you finding yourself in a confused state is normal. A very deep rage of emotions. I like the way you lingered the word.. "POETIC RAGE." I m wondering what poet paints with this kind of order... thank you for sharing, always~ PD Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/29/2012 5:24:00 PM oooh, this is the perfect title for one like this: seductive disarray. VERY creative! Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 11/29/2012 4:23:00 PM nicely penned Michael....thanks for those kind words...Love how you paint your words on the poetic canvas also.... Login to Reply

Ilene Bauer Date: 11/29/2012 3:59:00 PM i like the way you described that anger - well done! Login to Reply

Tanya Harrington Date: 11/29/2012 1:20:00 PM Oooo, can feel the fiery glower of your angst and ire. Like it. :) Tanya Login to Reply

Russell Sivey Date: 11/29/2012 1:05:00 PM Wow, Michael, you sure have gotten your creative pen back, no more writers block for you...it has been a while since you had that though I guess! Anyway, this is a fantastic and delightful write, I really enjoyed reading this incredibly awesome poem this afternoon! What a fascinating piece, Great Work!! Login to Reply