Seduction

she seduces  
like no other  
is even there  
in the distance  
a shadow's reflection  
what never could come  

she came  
in through my window  
a sensual sacrifice  
to all the senseless
sufferings in an insane world  
 
she sane  
took me away  
with the breath of fire  
burning all my bridges  
abridged above board  
 
she built  
fulfillment to foundation  
found amid the ruins  
sudden  
where man could stand  
and still would swoon  
 
she knew  
but couldn't say or stay  
what she didn't know  
was she lived in his night  
and in his day  
his every day

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Date: 10/8/2022 10:43:00 AM
she's probably a real hell cat...I hope for your sake she still has her halo in tact.
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 10/11/2022 2:09:00 AM
yeah, more than likely, if she's practical - it's good for cleaning all the shizz up and putting it in the fire, without burning her fingers. I can confirm, those type never wore a halo, let alone reached that level of pristine sainthood, and sanity...
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Ts Poetry
Date: 10/8/2022 10:54:00 AM
Most likely holding a pitchfork but one can hope halo
Date: 10/7/2022 9:04:00 PM
Seductive and a dark attraction.TS Well written my friend...
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Ts Poetry
Date: 10/8/2022 5:54:00 AM
Thank you michael
Date: 10/7/2022 3:35:00 PM
Hello TS Poetry, i wonder if he will ever know how she feels. Enjoy your evening my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/8/2022 11:29:00 AM
Hello TS Poetry, you are welcome my friend. Enjoy your day. my friend.
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Ts Poetry
Date: 10/7/2022 5:33:00 PM
Thank you
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