Seducing the Moon

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In awe of the power you possess; pull my tides in the night Extraterrestrial diodes; set the scene with backlight Silver and cold; blanketed in darkness chasing light My love; forever your tether; need you; just hold me tight I'll find you in my dreams; grasping you with all my might Holding, without touching my beloved; feels so right Worlds of devotion from Earth; to its betrothed satellite

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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 12/10/2023 8:31:00 PM

Love this. Fond of the moon I be, never far from her gravity. (I even have her tattooed) Hope you are well dear poet. xomo

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 12/11/2023 4:33:00 AM

<3<3 nice on the ink! I am doing well, really nice to hear from you Mo! I am in a very happy mind-set as of late, just trying to share that positivity. Warmly A.S.

Silent One

Date: 12/9/2023 6:47:00 AM

Nice monorhymes.. you really seduced the moon here..

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 12/10/2023 1:04:00 PM

Thank you! Life is so much better when you look at it through Love's eyes. Regards A.S.

Paige Hind

Date: 12/8/2023 3:37:00 PM

I am going to fav this! It's genius!

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 12/8/2023 6:18:00 PM

<3 I don't know about genius but, it was fun to write ;) warmly A.S.