Richard Lamoureux Poet Free verse

Seducing Beauty

I want to know
The limits of your passion
So I wade into your sea
Reaching to the depths of you
Losing myself within your blissful currents
I Penetrate the force of your nature

Slowly I ascend
To the surface of your wonder
Riding each passionate wave
Until I feel your release
The calming of you
The beauty of your stillness 

My hands stretch to your horizon
Marveling at the magnificence of you
You let them dance upon your softness
As I rise towards your sky
The winds of your changing
Caressing my being

You bathe me in a soft light
Gravity pulls me towards your moon
The stars adorn the blackness of your hair
Within your twinkles I am mesmerized
Confounded and elated by your orbit
Flung to the reaches of your constellations 

You are the the beginning and end of me
The resonance of all my notes
The answer to my need
My inner sanctum
The softness of my cravings
The realization of my wonder
The space within my understanding
The hope I breath
The suffocation of my fear
For with you I have come to know
What it means
To experience
Limitless
Passion

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Len Gasun November 2, 2014 at 8:58 AM Wow! A very wonderful romantic write my dear friend! I enjoyed so much the read. Thank you so much for sharing! love lots and big hugs, Leonora

Eileen Manassian October 27, 2014 at 6:52 AM I read it again....I enjoyed it more this time around. It's just simply magnificent, Richard. She is a lucky blessed and fortunate woman. Richard Lamoureux October 27, 2014 at 8:38 AM Fortunate for me she thinks so, when in fact I feel like the blessed and fortunate one. Thanks for rereading it.

Verlena S. Walker October 14, 2014 at 9:44 PM Congratulations Rick on your win. This poem is exceedingly passionate. I enjoyed it immensely... Verlena Richard Lamoureux October 21, 2014 at 9:06 AM Thanks Verlena.

Debra Squyres October 14, 2014 at 3:11 PM I see congrats are in order on a winning write and I can easily see why !! Beautifully intriguing poetry !! Richard Lamoureux October 14, 2014 at 7:40 PM Thanks sweet lady.

Jan Allison October 14, 2014 at 12:33 PM dropping back with my congrats Richard:-) hugs jan xxx Richard Lamoureux October 14, 2014 at 7:41 PM Thanks and a big hug back to you Jan.

Anne-Lise Andresen October 14, 2014 at 12:20 PM - A kind word costs nothing and is still the most beautiful gift of all: Congratulations, Richard ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Richard Lamoureux October 14, 2014 at 7:43 PM Thanks, I am fortunate you have left me many kind words.

Nette Onclaud October 14, 2014 at 11:26 AM ohh, you entice me, rich.. big cheers on your fine win! Richard Lamoureux October 14, 2014 at 7:44 PM Thanks Nette! Hugs Rick.

Maurice Yvonne October 14, 2014 at 9:37 AM ...loved it the first time love it still. Congratulations on being chosen fourth overall. Well deserved. Richard Lamoureux October 14, 2014 at 7:45 PM Thanks for coming back.

Monterey Sirak October 14, 2014 at 8:53 AM Congratulations! This is a beautifully penned romance of the heart and mind. Richard Lamoureux October 14, 2014 at 7:46 PM Hi Monterey, I am a bit behind on my response. Thanks so much for your visits today.

Kayod5 Kayode October 14, 2014 at 8:26 AM Super,congrats Richard. Richard Lamoureux October 14, 2014 at 7:47 PM Thanks Kayode.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma October 14, 2014 at 7:32 AM Wow a wonderful write Richard! Purely passionate n perfectly romantic! Congrats on huge win! Richard Lamoureux October 14, 2014 at 7:48 PM Thanks Upma, I appreciate your kind visit.

Paul Callus October 12, 2014 at 4:54 AM Excellent romantic free verse; like how you 'explore' the sea, metaphorically speaking. Very much inspired. // paul Richard Lamoureux October 14, 2014 at 7:50 PM ;0) thanks Paul!

Robert Lindley October 11, 2014 at 11:06 PM One of the best free verse writes I have read here. Good luck in the contest this should place very well my friend. A super 7 in my book.. Richard Lamoureux October 14, 2014 at 7:51 PM Wow, the award for favorite comment goes to you Robert. Thanks!

Carolyn Devonshire October 11, 2014 at 10:43 AM Dear Richard, the sea is a magnificent venue to explore in a passionate way and you stayed true to your theme throughout the entire write. My most romantic weekends were spent in my boat at sea. Wish I'd had someone like you with whom to share it. Sending a Soup Mail, my friend. Love and blessings for a great weekend, Carolyn Richard Lamoureux October 11, 2014 at 11:07 AM You are sweet Carolyn, he would be a fortunate man to share the experience with you. Thanks for the blessing, I hope you have a great weekend as well.

Ndaba Sibanda October 11, 2014 at 10:17 AM You have written an imaginatively and powerfully compelling poem, Richard. Wishing you all the best. Good luck! Richard Lamoureux October 11, 2014 at 11:08 AM Thanks Ndaba

Justin Bordner October 9, 2014 at 8:19 PM This poem finely illustrates masculine sensitivity, a unique quality of enamoured exploration Richard. The way you incorporate the natural elements into the fusion of your ability and her force's desire is very romantic. "I penetrate the force of your nature..." awesome physical and spiritual meaning! "Limitless passion" requires serious emotional endurance. J.A.B. Richard Lamoureux October 9, 2014 at 11:47 PM Hi Justin, your response illistrates your own deep understanding of a womans limitless passion. The right man can fully realize her possibilities and in the process experience a glimpse of eternity.

Maurice Yvonne October 9, 2014 at 6:52 PM Love this seductive write Richard. Using beautiful metaphors and similes keeping a measure of dignity. Love the way it should be. Richard Lamoureux October 9, 2014 at 11:52 PM Thanks Maurice.

Eileen Manassian October 9, 2014 at 3:54 PM Lovely in every way, Richard. Good luck in the contest. I won't be joining....The seductress in me is awfully quiet....I hope you go far with this. Hugs Eileen Manassian October 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM I don't know, Richard. Read the poem I'm about to post. Perhaps that will say something. I love your response to my post, Richard. I do...You first named me the Queen of the Romantic pen...what will I do if that pen runs dry? Thanks for the encouragement. Richard Lamoureux October 9, 2014 at 11:51 PM Eileen, you must enter Justin's contest. You are the mistress of the passionate, the Queen of the romantic pen. This is your realm! I will be so sad if you do not enter. Pleaaaseee enter.

Casarah Nance October 9, 2014 at 2:34 PM Much enjoyed the addition, now for another shower.... :) hugs baby this is nice :) Richard Lamoureux October 9, 2014 at 11:54 PM You make me smile! Thanks for coming back. I feel bad for causing a water shortage in your city, *lol*.

Anne-Lise Andresen October 9, 2014 at 11:47 AM - Richard, a romantic and beautifully written poem - Love it ..... really !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Richard Lamoureux October 9, 2014 at 11:55 PM Thanks Anne Lise. Hugs Rick.

Jan Allison October 9, 2014 at 9:44 AM passionate, seductive ... simply sensational Richard - good luck in the contest this should do very well for you! Hugs janxxx Richard Lamoureux October 11, 2014 at 11:15 AM Thanks and hugs back to you.

Tim Smith October 9, 2014 at 9:42 AM Awesome Richard...love how you used nature and all it's beauty as seduction...very clever...this will be sitting on top the podium...cheers my friend Richard Lamoureux October 11, 2014 at 11:16 AM Cheers and thanks back to you.

Casarah Nance October 9, 2014 at 9:12 AM Wow, keep going baby you are taking me to the moon, okay i'm gonna go take a cold shower and wonder what comes next :) Richard Lamoureux October 11, 2014 at 11:23 AM Warm water properly placed would be a lot better than a cold shower. *lol*

J. R. Corbin October 9, 2014 at 9:08 AM Well, if it's not done, you are surely off to a great start! Powerful stuff, Richard. High passion. very nice. Jim Richard Lamoureux October 11, 2014 at 11:25 AM Thanks J.R. it is now completed.