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SPEAKING OF SEDOKA Poetry Contest. Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud ~ Date Written:5/24/2026

SEDOKA - FALLING ROCKS

Falling rocks like love
and friendship can go down fast
what a disaster

Saying, I'm sorry
giving out much needed hugs
crush the rocks to sand

friendshiplovesorryspoken wordsedoka

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Len Gasun

May 31, 2026 at 7:29 PM

I agree my dear poet friend. Humility and forgiveness softens one's heart. I love and enjoyed this gem. Thanks a lot for sharing. Best wishes always. Hugs

Sam Kauffman

May 30, 2026 at 5:08 PM

Lovely and full of your wisdom, Paula, especially with your emphasis on forgiveness! Best wishes for the contest. Blessings as you build sand castles.

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 29, 2026 at 11:38 AM

- So true, Paula - Great message :) - GL in the contest :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs

Christine Watts

May 28, 2026 at 5:01 PM

Hi Paula. Yes a sorry goes a long way and sand is what we want Nicely written Cheers Christine

Yann Rolland

May 27, 2026 at 4:52 PM

so creative and touching poetry, enjoyed

Christopher Delegans

May 26, 2026 at 9:15 PM

Such a great message out so creatively. Nice job, Paula.

David Crandall

May 26, 2026 at 8:40 PM

Great poem Paula! I love it. Crush those rocks to sand!

Kim Rodrigues

May 26, 2026 at 10:13 AM

Ooh…like this! Save love and friendship before they get washed over. Hugs

Paula Goldsmith

May 26, 2026 at 10:42 AM

Great to see you here. "Thank You." Glad you like my "SEDOKA - FALLING ROCKS" write. I enjoyed writing this powerful one. Oh yes, many times it can be saved. Have a great/fun day writing away...................

sara Etgen-Baker

May 25, 2026 at 5:19 PM

appreciate the 'rock' analogy. Thought provoking & nicely penned. Wishing you well, Paula, hugs, Sara

Paula Goldsmith

May 26, 2026 at 10:39 AM

Great to see you here. "Thank You." Also Thanks for your, Wishing me well. Glad you found my "SEDOKA - FALLING ROCKS" to be, Thought provoking & nicely penned. I enjoyed writing this powerful one. Have a great/fun day writing away...................

Sotto Poet

May 25, 2026 at 1:23 PM

Beautiful, profound, and a fascinating and contemplative poem, Paula! Several primary ideas in this magnificent poetry really hit home.

Paula Goldsmith

May 26, 2026 at 10:38 AM

Great to see you here. "Thank You." Also Thanks for your, very kind words. Glad you found my "SEDOKA - FALLING ROCKS" to be a, Beautiful, profound, and a fascinating and contemplative poem. I enjoyed writing this powerful one. Have a great/fun day writing away...................

Line Gauthier

May 25, 2026 at 12:24 PM

Much wisdom between these lines ~

Paula Goldsmith

May 26, 2026 at 10:30 AM

Great to see you here. "Thank You." Glad you found my "SEDOKA - FALLING ROCKS" to have, Much wisdom between these lines. I enjoyed writing this powerful one. Have a great/fun day writing away...................

Victor Buhagiar

May 25, 2026 at 8:14 AM

How important it is to forgive and forget.

Paula Goldsmith

May 26, 2026 at 10:28 AM

Great to see you here. "Thank You." Glad you enjoyed my "SEDOKA - FALLING ROCKS" write. I enjoyed writing this powerful one. Oh yes, it is very important to forgive/forget. I Do... Have a great/fun day writing away...................

Judy Ball

May 25, 2026 at 6:25 AM

A heartfelt apology can go a long way. Well done my friend. God Bless, JB

Paula Goldsmith

May 26, 2026 at 10:27 AM

Great to see you here. "Thank You." Glad you found my "SEDOKA - FALLING ROCKS" to be, Well done. Oh yes, A heartfelt apology can go a long way. Have a great/fun day writing away...................

JC Brul

May 24, 2026 at 8:44 PM

It is such a pleasure reading poems created by a human poet dear Paula. Stay sweet ^__^ JCB

Paula Goldsmith

May 26, 2026 at 10:23 AM

Great to see you here. "Thank You." Glad you found my "SEDOKA - FALLING ROCKS" to be, a pleasure reading. I enjoyed writing this powerful one. Oh yes, 100% human here No AI for me. God gives me my words to write. Have a great/fun day writing away...................

Sara Kendrick

May 24, 2026 at 5:14 PM

Ahh, I like this one, Paula. Thank you for sharing it with us. Way to go. Sara K.

Paula Goldsmith

May 26, 2026 at 10:19 AM

Great to see you here. "Thank You." Glad you like my "SEDOKA - FALLING ROCKS" write. I enjoyed writing this powerful one. Have a great/fun day writing away...................

Andrea Dietrich

May 24, 2026 at 3:25 PM

Great thinking, Paula. You always have your thinking cap on

Paula Goldsmith

May 26, 2026 at 10:18 AM

Great to see you here. "Thank You." Glad you found my "SEDOKA - FALLING ROCKS" to be a, Great thinking. I think, my thinking cap is part of my head. Hahaha!!! Have a great/fun day writing away...................

Joseph P. DiMino

May 24, 2026 at 2:42 PM

Sorry, truly said, always works for me. I mean, I have messed up myself a few times...hmm, a few thousand. Great read!

Paula Goldsmith

May 26, 2026 at 10:15 AM

Great to see you here. "Thank You." Glad you found my "SEDOKA - FALLING ROCKS" to be a, Great read. I enjoyed writing this powerful one. Oh yes, guess we all have messed up a few thousand times over the many years. "Sorry" truly said, can make a very big difference. Have a great/fun day writing away...................

Paula Goldsmith

May 24, 2026 at 2:39 PM

"SEDOKA - FALLING ROCKS." ~ Date Written:5/24/2026 ~ Written By Human Poet........

SEDOKA - FALLING ROCKS

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