Seren Roberts Poet Sedoka

Sedoka Contest

lay crumbled on floor
her face alabaster white
red lips as though they had bled
     no life anymore
     beautiful blue eyes shut tight
     puppeteer had cut the thread.

13 January 2016

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Poet Destroyer A January 28, 2016 at 9:16 PM Seren, Congrats on your interesting win. Love LINDA -

Sara Kendrick January 23, 2016 at 11:16 AM Amazing Sedoka poem has landed on this winners’ list. Congrats on your win. Sara

Andrea Dietrich January 19, 2016 at 4:10 PM this one has one of the best final lines in the whole contest!! Congrats, Seren. Seren Roberts January 20, 2016 at 5:48 PM Andrea how kind of you thank you......Seren

Beautiful Scars January 18, 2016 at 11:26 AM Seren, many thanks for being a part of my contest, and congrats on your placement *smiles* -luloo Seren Roberts January 19, 2016 at 1:01 PM Thank you Laura I enjoyed your context......Seren

Skat A January 18, 2016 at 10:51 AM SEREN, Congrats on your "SEDOKA FORM (Rhymed) winning poem." love SKAT**

Jan Allison January 16, 2016 at 6:46 AM what sad imagery Seren:-( good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma January 14, 2016 at 1:14 AM Wow such a beauty.. that subtle emotion.. Gl in contest! Seren Roberts January 19, 2016 at 1:02 PM Thank you Dr Upma ....Seren

Eve Roper January 13, 2016 at 11:52 PM Heartbreaking poem, Seren, a 7. Hugs Eve Seren Roberts January 17, 2016 at 9:39 AM Hi Eve I think a crump!ed puppet looks so sad....Seren