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Sedoka Contest

lay crumbled on floor her face alabaster white red lips as though they had bled no life anymore beautiful blue eyes shut tight puppeteer had cut the thread. 13 January 2016

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Date: 1/28/2016 9:16:00 PM
Seren, Congrats on your interesting win. Love LINDA -
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Date: 1/23/2016 11:16:00 AM
Amazing Sedoka poem has landed on this winners’ list. Congrats on your win. Sara
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Date: 1/19/2016 4:10:00 PM
this one has one of the best final lines in the whole contest!! Congrats, Seren.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 1/20/2016 5:48:00 PM
Andrea how kind of you thank you......Seren
Date: 1/18/2016 11:26:00 AM
Seren, many thanks for being a part of my contest, and congrats on your placement *smiles* -luloo
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Seren Roberts
Date: 1/19/2016 1:01:00 PM
Thank you Laura I enjoyed your context......Seren
Date: 1/18/2016 10:51:00 AM
SEREN, Congrats on your "SEDOKA FORM (Rhymed) winning poem." love SKAT**
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Date: 1/16/2016 6:46:00 AM
what sad imagery Seren:-( good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/14/2016 1:14:00 AM
Wow such a beauty.. that subtle emotion.. Gl in contest!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 1/19/2016 1:02:00 PM
Thank you Dr Upma ....Seren
Date: 1/13/2016 11:52:00 PM
Heartbreaking poem, Seren, a 7. Hugs Eve
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Seren Roberts
Date: 1/17/2016 9:39:00 AM
Hi Eve I think a crump!ed puppet looks so sad....Seren

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