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Secrets Lie - For Contest

Secrets Lie The breeze at dawn has secrets to tell you* listen not to the vagrant zephyr seeking only sustenance of its kind idol thinkers lolling in innocence swayed by every whispering sigh unaware - that secrets lie. line 7 - *Rumi John G. Lawless 7/23/2015 for Complete the Lines – poetry contest sponsor – Nette Onclaud

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Date: 8/5/2015 8:50:00 PM
Deep and beautifully crafted from that first line. So far, John, I have not seen anyone else that chose the line I chose. I must be the only diehard Sara Teasdale fan in the bunch!! Congrats on your gem!
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Date: 8/5/2015 1:17:00 AM
thanks for being part of my contest, john.. big congrats on your win; i like "idol thinkers lolling in innocence.."
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Date: 8/4/2015 12:42:00 PM
Congrats on your win, John :)
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Date: 8/4/2015 8:54:00 AM
Congrats on your win John! Wonderful write!
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Date: 8/4/2015 12:54:00 AM
Congrats on ur winning awesome write John! Wonderful imagery!
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Date: 8/4/2015 12:45:00 AM
John, Congratulations on your win. **SKAT**
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Date: 8/3/2015 10:15:00 PM
John, congratulations on your win a 7 good write. Hugs eve
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Date: 8/3/2015 4:52:00 PM
beautifully penned John many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/3/2015 8:39:00 AM
Ah, this is pretty good! We actually have almost the same theme..."Life Lessons"? :-))) congrats JOhn! hugs!
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