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Secrets Hidden in Lotion

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Written: July 17, 2025, for contest sponsored by: Kai Michael Neumann Quote: "Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words," By Poet ********* It glides—not gently, but akin to a scrupulous scalpel, a syllabic salve for rusted throats and trapped desires. It drips down the well of grief, melting into metaphor, softening jagged memories into pains that are easier to bear. This poetry is not serene. It is slick with secrets and greasy with grammar's serpentine filth, and sentences thrum through the engine of anguish. You utter the words, and the universe starts to shift. A bearing in the brain, a balm under the bruises, and syntax strung, such as silk between broken cogs of memory. Each line is dense. Each verse unwinds— caught in the hinge of desire and pain. Essence of the oracle, gleam of refinement. Let it spread: a rhythm that caresses, a mouthful of taut truths seeping through the snags of silence.

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Date: 7/18/2025 4:05:00 AM
This poem cuts deep with its raw honesty and vivid imagery. I love how you capture poetry’s transformative power—as both a balm and a razor—shaping pain into something bearable and even beautiful. Truly haunting and masterfully crafted.
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Date: 7/17/2025 5:11:00 PM
I loved your beginning quote...it resonated with me as did your poem. Your words are dense indeed. I especially liked the last verse
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Date: 7/17/2025 12:13:00 PM
"It glides—not gently, but akin to a scrupulous scalpel" a fav for me
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Date: 7/17/2025 7:45:00 AM
SP, indeed it's a struggle to communicate and to understand what we see. One has to be able to probe deeply, and that's really tough these days. Hope you are well and sending smiles!!
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Date: 7/17/2025 5:42:00 AM
This is just doggone good poetry, especially stanza two. Poetry can get all messy, in a good way
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