Secrets

SECRETS Breaking shackles of restraint Is love the lost key? Heart opened? FADE TO GREY I gave away tomorrow So you have today? This in lieu? MECHANICAL RESPONSE The clock on the wall ticks on Yet my heart does not? Sick of life? © Harry J Horsman 2014

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/27/2015 8:01:00 AM

Seeing Lucilla's comment is kind of Errie. She was a very nice lady and is missed. I hope you get the most out of each day you are gifted. Your poem gives me pause.

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 5/24/2014 11:34:00 PM

A great poem. I hope your heart keeps ticking. Mine almost stopped, but it's alright now. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/26/2014 10:14:00 AM

Harry, I came to reread this one. I think I got even more out of it the second time. I really like how you put titles to each one!! It sets each one apart though they still go together.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/21/2014 6:02:00 PM

Harry, not seeing a new poem to comment to, but I see you WON , so a hearty congratulations to you, and thanks so much for visiting my poetry today. Luv, Andrea

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/21/2014 3:30:00 PM

wow, an array of creative quinzaines.. beautiful, harry.. congrats!.. huggs

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/20/2014 12:35:00 PM

Harry, Congratulations, the poem is awesome. Enjoyed your winning poem. Happy Easter, luv LINDA

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 4/20/2014 11:05:00 AM

Liked all especially secrets ! Very well written n a deserved great win ! Congrats Harry !

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/20/2014 9:43:00 AM

Thanks for your support and congrats on the win in my contest, harry

Joseph May

Date: 4/20/2014 9:10:00 AM

well done Harry...congrats on your win

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 4/16/2014 2:11:00 AM

Hi there you didn't post our collab on your page but I am sending you the congrats on our place, ha i think it should have come first but nevertheless a place lol , You are great to work with thanks xx

Mel Merrill

Date: 4/16/2014 12:41:00 AM

Nicely done, Harry. I'm new and don't know how the contests work, but good luck, nonetheless. Drop by anytime. Peace, Mel :)

Joseph May

Date: 4/15/2014 8:18:00 PM

Great write Harry...good luck in the contest

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/15/2014 4:03:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Reads like winning material to me..Way to go for the contest..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/14/2014 6:56:00 PM

these just got better and better, Harry. the last one was my favorite of all.

Tim Smith

Date: 4/14/2014 6:54:00 PM

If you find love it will cure all that ails. Wonderful and thought provoking Harry

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 4/14/2014 2:26:00 PM

Harry; This poem is sad. Find that key. I lost my car keys once along with my house key. It cost me $125.00 I found them two month later. Smile be happy... Lucilla

Eileen Manassian

Date: 4/14/2014 2:20:00 PM

Harry, deep...thought provoking. That lost key must be found. :) Good luck on the contest...hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/14/2014 12:21:00 PM

- Perhaps the key to life ............ well done - Luck in contest, Harry ! - oxox //Anne-Lise :)

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 4/14/2014 10:37:00 AM

oh to hold the key and cure the sickness xx