Secrets

SECRETS

Breaking shackles of restraint
Is love the lost key?
Heart opened?

FADE TO GREY

I gave away tomorrow
So you have today?
This in lieu?

MECHANICAL RESPONSE

The clock on the wall ticks on
Yet my heart does not?
Sick of life?

© Harry J Horsman  2014

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Richard Lamoureux

July 27, 2015 at 8:01 AM

Seeing Lucilla's comment is kind of Errie. She was a very nice lady and is missed. I hope you get the most out of each day you are gifted. Your poem gives me pause.

Lucilla Carrillo

May 24, 2014 at 11:34 PM

A great poem. I hope your heart keeps ticking. Mine almost stopped, but it's alright now. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla

Andrea Dietrich

April 26, 2014 at 10:14 AM

Harry, I came to reread this one. I think I got even more out of it the second time. I really like how you put titles to each one!! It sets each one apart though they still go together.

Andrea Dietrich

April 21, 2014 at 6:02 PM

Harry, not seeing a new poem to comment to, but I see you WON , so a hearty congratulations to you, and thanks so much for visiting my poetry today. Luv, Andrea

Nette Onclaud

April 21, 2014 at 3:30 PM

wow, an array of creative quinzaines.. beautiful, harry.. congrats!.. huggs

Poet Destroyer A

April 20, 2014 at 12:35 PM

Harry, Congratulations, the poem is awesome. Enjoyed your winning poem. Happy Easter, luv LINDA

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

April 20, 2014 at 11:05 AM

Liked all especially secrets ! Very well written n a deserved great win ! Congrats Harry !

Dr.Ram Mehta

April 20, 2014 at 9:43 AM

Thanks for your support and congrats on the win in my contest, harry

Joseph May

April 20, 2014 at 9:10 AM

well done Harry...congrats on your win

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

April 16, 2014 at 2:11 AM

Hi there you didn't post our collab on your page but I am sending you the congrats on our place, ha i think it should have come first but nevertheless a place lol , You are great to work with thanks xx

Mel Merrill

April 16, 2014 at 12:41 AM

Nicely done, Harry. I'm new and don't know how the contests work, but good luck, nonetheless. Drop by anytime. Peace, Mel :)

Joseph May

April 15, 2014 at 8:18 PM

Great write Harry...good luck in the contest

Sara Kendrick

April 15, 2014 at 4:03 PM

Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Reads like winning material to me..Way to go for the contest..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

April 14, 2014 at 6:56 PM

these just got better and better, Harry. the last one was my favorite of all.

Tim Smith

April 14, 2014 at 6:54 PM

If you find love it will cure all that ails. Wonderful and thought provoking Harry

Lucilla Carrillo

April 14, 2014 at 2:26 PM

Harry; This poem is sad. Find that key. I lost my car keys once along with my house key. It cost me $125.00 I found them two month later. Smile be happy... Lucilla