Secrets

Secrets are not told and kept intact
Because we are not sure how others will react.
Secrets are meant to be unknown
Shackled,chained and all alone.
Pulled away from everyone's sight,
Into the chamber of darkness where there is no light.
They wait for days,weeks or maybe years,
To escape and put an end to their tears
And  when that happens they throw up the veil,
The things which were once hidden are spread in the air.
They unfold for good or otherwise worse
Without caring whether the consequences turn out to be a blessing or a curse.
Then they happily go away,
Out in the sunlight,into the day.
However back in the chamber many of them are dead and even more still in captivity
But watch out as they do never give up their desire to be free.

-Sadaf Syed

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 7/20/2012 12:56:00 PM
Good write with some very good imagery!
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Date: 7/17/2012 11:59:00 AM
Sadaf just a quick congrats on your win..David
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Date: 7/17/2012 7:18:00 AM
Love how you've used personification to bring your words to life - secrets do have a way of escaping from captivity, don't they? Very nice Sadaf!
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Date: 7/16/2012 2:43:00 PM
Interesting perspective on 'secrets'... nice poem... congratulations on your win... Terry
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Date: 7/16/2012 9:54:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in the new poet (Only) 2012 contest Sadaf. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/16/2012 2:51:00 AM
Sadaf ,,congratulations with your win in my contest... always pd... soup mail...
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Date: 4/30/2012 8:10:00 AM
very true, I like the way you have expressed you feeling with clear thoughts thats matter in keeping secrets untold.
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Date: 1/30/2012 8:39:00 AM
Sadaf, Congratulations on the choice of your wonderful poem. Secrets are meant to be unknown Shackled, chained and all alone. I love your use of throwing up the veil. Kathy
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Date: 1/30/2012 6:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved featured poetry this week Sadaf. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/16/2012 11:16:00 PM
very nice composition
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Date: 1/14/2012 12:15:00 PM
Smile ˜ "Against Thee and only Thee have I sinned...." ˜ Nothing, is Ever hidden from the Only One to whom it truly matters ˜ Stirring poe ˜ Love, John!:) ˜
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