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Secreted Pond

Quixotic are we Our bliss every night one kiss A phantom mirrored In a fervent moonlit pond Like Nushi and Suseri*

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Date: 6/14/2012 5:04:00 AM
A belated congratulations on your win in ^Rick's "Lets Pass A Tanka Love Note" contest Amy. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/11/2012 8:42:00 PM
Congrats on your win Amy! It's fabulous and I love how you referenced Japanese mythology. A fave for me. Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 6/11/2012 1:13:00 PM
Love how you wrote it using Japanese mythology as subject matter. It seems to be a bit more 'authentic'. Congrats on your win....Tanya
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Date: 6/11/2012 2:18:00 AM
Amy congrats on your win...David
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Date: 6/10/2012 8:17:00 PM
boy, that Rick sure knows how to pick some great winners. I am loving all the poems on the winner list tonight. so cool how you referenced these tragic lovers. Congrats.
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Date: 6/10/2012 5:28:00 PM
Love this one!!!!!Great imagery- Beautiful story....................Hushed in passion's heat!!!;-) Congrats
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Date: 6/7/2012 11:35:00 PM
I didn't know their lovers story either Amy, thank you for sharing a beautiful write.
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Date: 5/27/2012 4:58:00 PM
You read Japanese mythology to Amy, completed poem for the contest, hope for a win for you. - oxox Anne-Lise
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Date: 5/26/2012 9:48:00 PM
I love how you put the Japanese mythology into it. I bet Rick will love that!! Great tanka.
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