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Secreted Pond

Quixotic are we
                     Our bliss every night one kiss
                           A phantom mirrored
                       In a fervent moonlit pond
                         Like Nushi and Suseri*

Copyright © Amy Green | Year Posted 2012

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Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 6/14/2012 5:04:00 AM A belated congratulations on your win in ^Rick's "Lets Pass A Tanka Love Note" contest Amy. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Date: 6/11/2012 8:42:00 PM Congrats on your win Amy! It's fabulous and I love how you referenced Japanese mythology. A fave for me. Love and Blessings, Rhonda Login to Reply

Tanya Harrington Date: 6/11/2012 1:13:00 PM Love how you wrote it using Japanese mythology as subject matter. It seems to be a bit more 'authentic'. Congrats on your win....Tanya Login to Reply

David Williams Date: 6/11/2012 2:18:00 AM Amy congrats on your win...David Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/10/2012 8:17:00 PM boy, that Rick sure knows how to pick some great winners. I am loving all the poems on the winner list tonight. so cool how you referenced these tragic lovers. Congrats. Login to Reply

Izzy Gumbo Date: 6/7/2012 11:35:00 PM I didn't know their lovers story either Amy, thank you for sharing a beautiful write. Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/27/2012 4:58:00 PM You read Japanese mythology to Amy, completed poem for the contest, hope for a win for you. - oxox Anne-Lise Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/26/2012 9:48:00 PM I love how you put the Japanese mythology into it. I bet Rick will love that!! Great tanka. Login to Reply