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Merry Elves, exhausted delivering gifts, decided to accomplish pretty swift get their toughest job done.. for cute children to have fun, with incredible toys, hard to resist. Damian and Ashwin's, Elves opened door, the boys had been diligent doing chores, total silence, they’re in bed... children and pets - "great" Elves said.. "What's shining bright and tempting on the floor!" "Ha! An open brand new Pokémon game, why don't we have some good fun - none will blame", they all left in a rush when... mommy summoned the children, lucky day for Elves, perfect time they came! Elves were super excited, thrilled to play, when children were fast asleep, they sure may, Santa would not know a bit, what they are up to...a kit, best chance for them to enjoy right away! Damian's Fish gazed at them from the bowl, a Guppy who listens to Rock n' Roll, Elves didn't mind the swimming fish, Finally met secret wish... "who cares a fish..no other watching soul!" November 24, 2022 For "Children's Limerick" Poetry Contest Sponsor: Eve Roper syllables (10-10-7-7-10) in every stanza checked by HMS.com rhymes checked by Rhymezone.com SECOND PLACE

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Date: 12/4/2022 11:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Malabika, even the Elves need to have a little relax time . Many Blessings my friend
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Date: 12/4/2022 3:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your winner in Eve's contest. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 11/30/2022 12:26:00 PM
Dearest Mala, a sweet and lovely children’s limerick full of merry Christmas spirit and playful elves. Who wouldn’t love “a Guppy who listens to Rock ‘n Roll” - such fun! Secret Christmas wishes should alway come true.. and with the your golden pen of enchantment, they do! Such a beautiful and magical piece full of holiday cheer. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you, my wonderful friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 11/27/2022 3:29:00 AM
Such fun for the elves. Thank God, your grandchildren, Damian and Ashwin didn't wake up in the night. Even if they did, I am sure they wouldn't object the elves having some fun. :) Great limericks Mala
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Date: 11/26/2022 5:07:00 AM
This is sweet and fun. I enjoyed it. I love the guppy listening to rock n roll ! Great one :)
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