Secret Wish

do you have a secret life
staring off into space
a new, hidden vague look on your face
fear strikes me down
you are gone
closed

do you have a secret wish
to be gone
and done with all of this
are you off already in your head
making plans

I'm shivering

I fear you've found another soul
whos patience has not grown thin
someone to turn to in your middle life
who will take you on
 
have you had a secret desire
all this time
to be let go, to wander
and you never let me know....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 4/8/2011 11:46:00 PM
a very interesting poem on human psychology, Veronica. this deals with a very human trait in many,I am sure. Thanks so much for your comment at my blog. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 4/1/2011 4:02:00 AM
I think most of us experience these feelings at some point in our life. Gripping fear - the thought of losing someone dear to our heart. Great writing, Veronica. Lainie
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Date: 3/24/2011 5:45:00 PM
Good questions to ask...Enjoyed reading your work this eve..Thanks for stopping by my blog..I appreciate the kind comments..Sara
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Date: 3/23/2011 3:13:00 PM
worries? john
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