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Secret Window

Thoughts emanate poetically,
vast, like the worlds oceans.
My serum for daily life,
to the world I share my potion.

Symbolic words materialize,
marinating in my mind.
A poetic type affinity,
stored within my mental shrine.

Jared Pickett
11/06/06
Asavvy1

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Date: 6/4/2010 5:32:00 PM

Much to ponder in this poem. Congratulations on making it through the first round of the Poetry Soup contest with this poem. Best wishes in the finals. Karen

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/3/2010 12:46:00 PM

Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round Jared. I wish you the best in the finals. Love, Carol

Gert W. Knop

Date: 6/1/2010 5:47:00 AM

Congrats for making it into the first round, Jared! All the best and have a nice week...Gert

Date: 5/31/2010 8:28:00 PM

Congratulations my dear Mr JP. Wow you made the first round of competition. Cool. Love Scarlett

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/31/2010 10:16:00 AM

Congrats Jared on your poem making it to the first round of competition in Poetry Soup contest... way to go Mr. J..Lone Wolf ASavvy 1.. good luck.. rocognition supreme...with luv from the "Sweetheart" ...

Date: 5/4/2010 7:11:00 PM

Powerful piece leaving the reader with a lot to ponder about. Creative perspective. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen

John Freeman

Date: 5/3/2010 6:44:00 PM

Congratulations my friend on a worthy poem feature this week. Agape, Moses

Margaret Foster

Date: 5/3/2010 4:26:00 PM

I am glad you chose to share with the world Jared. Congratulations on being featured this week......Margaret

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/3/2010 4:15:00 PM

Congrats ASavvy 1 on your featured poem this week on the Soup .. an excellent choice to feature and share my gifted friend..and u will be proud of me.. I have written 5 Sestina's since your contest... and one for another contest on MOTHER.... thankxxx for turning me onto this form.. I luv it... with luv.. from the "Sweetheart"

Janette Fisher

Date: 5/3/2010 9:13:00 AM

Many congrats on your featured piece. Rgds Janette

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/3/2010 3:54:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week at PoetrySoup. May you have many more features Jared. Love, Carol

Izzy Gumbo

Date: 2/25/2010 8:38:00 AM

"marinating in my mind"... brilliant. :) It's wonderful to be reading you this morning my friend. xo I've missed being here.

Skat A

Date: 2/18/2010 7:50:00 PM

ENJOYED READING YOUR QUICK POEM..... ...IRMA

Elaine George

Date: 1/15/2010 6:36:00 AM

And I am so glad you share them. A beautiful fragrance! Thank you, Jared, and thank you for your kind comments. Lainie

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/12/2010 7:45:00 PM

Luv your word use and flow and title too.. u are back stronger than ever... emotional upheaval must jump start your creative juices... like this one lots... luv.. "Sweetheart"

Mary Meade Stephenson

Date: 1/12/2010 11:36:00 AM

Hello Jared and how are you doing? This is a wonderfully written piece that you have shared with us!! Powerful and so very true!! Thanks so much for sharing and for taking the time to read my writes. Have a blessed day~Mary

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/12/2010 9:33:00 AM

The ability to express thoughts so beautifully in verse is indeed like a "serum for daily life," Jared. You have hit on the greatest reward of writing in this terrific "Secret Window" through which you see the world. Awesome! Love, Carolyn

Raul Moreno

Date: 1/11/2010 9:13:00 PM

Mental Shrine was a nice ending...Raul

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 1/11/2010 7:05:00 PM

Awesome, Jared! Very well written short poem, great choice of words that offer great imagery. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your comments on mine. Yes, it is written for Colleen Bono. Best wishes, Caroline.