Secret Whisper

Ahh, as you seat there under the twilight of the night, who would have known you were my destiny. For now, you are the means of me beneath Orion, Earth, and sea. The sages of Rome and the Gods of the Greeks; Athena, Heroine of Venus pay homage to the love shared between us. All shall add our names to songs of their history.

I yearn to become a part of you down to the very core of your being. My place is with you and to be always in your grace. I whisper your name in the secret crypt of my covenant; that no other man alive can witness your worth to me. For you are for me… and me alone. 

Whenever I hold you in my arms, I control all time and space. Whenever I look into your eyes, I stand face to face with the immortals… all those in Heaven. Your eyes, your lips, your touch on my flesh, the smell of your skin   Ahhhh…The taste of you, the breath of you, I … 

Exhaling to release the passion of my love for you, I yield momentary rest. Gathering my thoughts, I silence the ego of my vanity of knowing it is I who wash my soul in the waters of your natural spring and is revived; I who eat the fruit of your garden and bear the strength of 10.

I chuckle at the mere mortals that walk the earth as men. With you, by my side, I am the royalty on which Nobles stand. I am the might of Hercules and the power of Zeus. By the roar of the greatness of the lion “The King” ... I hold immense pride in bringing you to heights of mountains, to the falls of its waters, and the pleasures of its wonders. You’ve captured me with the force of tornado winds, and on your wings, I am carried still. 

 07-05-19
Written for a contest. Placed as N/A. Not sure why.. As a woman, I have witnessed men dominate, rule, and conquer for the love of a woman. This is what I believe went through their minds.  As per history..per-sae.

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Date: 9/17/2020 11:35:00 AM
Poetry is art. You have painted for me.. A hurricane. Reading this piece I was inside the eye of a hurricane. Completely surrounded by danger standing my ground unyielding to the thoughts of others. A mortal being being defiant. Thank you for sharing
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Niyna Desangre
Date: 9/20/2020 3:43:00 PM
I appreciate you taking the time to read, especially the time to pen such a bold and gracious commitment. Powerful men are great works of art! I awe at the thought of them.... With dreamy eyes.*** Niyna
Date: 7/5/2019 10:26:00 AM
What a powerful pen...Love your write style and message...
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Niyna Desangre
Date: 7/5/2019 7:09:00 PM
Thank you very kindly. I am pleased you've read and commented. ~~~Niyna
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