Secret Universe

stars shine far above in skies of pitch ebony... diagram of keys. © Harry J Horsman 2012

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Željko Sitar

Date: 4/24/2012 1:50:00 AM

So.....great and beutiful poem. I have memorized your words!!!! Greetings:)))

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 4/23/2012 3:33:00 PM

This is interesting, Harry! The constellations, or the horoscope soothsayers interpretations? Now I'm thinking. You never asked what happened when the jay lifted it's tail.:( Best wishes!!! Mikki

Harry Horsman
Date: 4/23/2012 4:38:00 PM

No, but i've a good idea, ah ah, thanks for your wonderful comments. harry

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 4/23/2012 6:52:00 AM

enjoyed reading this....It could be interpreted many ways!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/22/2012 3:56:00 PM

A map in the heaven's that relates to all below. I love this one Harry. Mahalo

Bl Devnath

Date: 4/22/2012 2:04:00 PM

Lovely imaged, loved the reading. Loved always, bl

Wilma Neels

Date: 4/22/2012 12:25:00 PM

love your 2nd line Harry ;) hope your weekend is a great one! Love Wilma

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/22/2012 8:39:00 AM

always lovely images Harry luv.. yes I am leaving PS.. my last poem explains why and states the reason.. have had a great run here luv but my creative spirit urges me to move on.. will keep in touch and let u know where I go to post my poetry again.. take cdare and thankxx for being a wonderful friend to me..luv..