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Secret Storm

SECRET STORM Secret storm in heart salient yet on silent scream. Gale outburst tears off passionate petals of ardent ardor. Gust in lust on thrust brought redolence from past Love is whirling in my mind causing enigma putting emerald emotion in dilemma sinking in violent vortex of stupor. Hidden memory igniting my thirst not to be quenched. Whom I had left at a corner of path of my life still pricking piercing my heart throbbing with pulse. Tempest in mind smothered senses in intense impulse. Secret storm in soul never allowing me to forget or tolerate In vain trying to seek solace in turmoil and turbulence. 10/24/18 Sixth Place 'Soap Opera Titles' Contest by Janis Thompson Contest No 515 by Brian Strand.

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Line Gauthier

Date: 11/11/2018 7:31:00 PM

Well done, Anisha. Congrats on your well deserved win.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 11/8/2018 11:35:00 PM

If we could only turn the mind off when we wish or forget what we want to forget, life would so much easier. Congratulations on your win with this honored piece! : )

Janis Thompson

Date: 11/8/2018 6:32:00 PM

There is definitely a storm in this poem. I love the metaphors and vivid, intense images. Congratulations and thanks for entering the contest.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/26/2018 12:50:00 PM

"Love is whirling in my mind causing enigma putting emerald emotion in dilemma "... beautifully written, Anisha :) - When we think back in time ... most people know this storm :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joanna Daniel

Date: 10/25/2018 8:17:00 AM

A storm well worded, Anisha:)

Anisha Dutta
Date: 10/25/2018 11:24:00 AM

Thanks Jo.