Secret Storm

SECRET STORM

            Secret storm in heart salient yet on silent scream.
     Gale outburst tears off passionate petals of ardent ardor.  
    Gust in lust on thrust brought redolence from past
     Love is whirling in my mind causing enigma
     putting emerald emotion in dilemma
    sinking in violent vortex of stupor.

     Hidden memory igniting my thirst not to be quenched.
  Whom I had left at a corner of path of my life
   still pricking piercing my heart throbbing with pulse.
    Tempest in mind smothered senses in intense impulse.
    Secret storm in soul never allowing me to forget or tolerate
      In vain trying to seek solace in turmoil and turbulence.

     10/24/18
 
     Sixth Place
  'Soap Opera Titles' Contest by Janis Thompson

    Contest No 515 by Brian Strand.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
November 11, 2018 at 7:31 PM
Well done, Anisha. Congrats on your well deserved win.
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 8, 2018 at 11:35 PM
If we could only turn the mind off when we wish or forget what we want to forget, life would so much easier. Congratulations on your win with this honored piece! : )
Medders Tobechi Avatar
November 8, 2018 at 6:32 PM
There is definitely a storm in this poem. I love the metaphors and vivid, intense images. Congratulations and thanks for entering the contest.
Andresen Avatar
October 26, 2018 at 12:50 PM
"Love is whirling in my mind causing enigma       putting emerald emotion in dilemma "... beautifully written, Anisha :) - When we think back in time ... most people know this storm :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Daniel Avatar
October 25, 2018 at 8:17 AM
A storm well worded, Anisha:)
Dutta Avatar
October 25, 2018 at 11:24 AM
Thanks Jo.
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