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Secret Shelter

night's moonlit arbour laden with blooming desires, lovers' secret shelter Date : 07/09/2017

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Date: 8/30/2022 7:40:00 AM
You wrap Amour with sensuality under a moonlit sky. Superb writing! Brian
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Date: 9/6/2022 5:58:00 AM
Thanks, Brian.
Date: 10/17/2021 10:23:00 PM
lovely
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Date: 9/6/2022 5:57:00 AM
Thanks, Karen.
Date: 7/27/2017 1:53:00 AM
Wonderful poem reminding me that we all should have Ethics as our house not simple shelter. Thanks for visit and sharing.Blooming desires. Wonderful said like Worte wie blumen.
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Date: 7/31/2017 11:31:00 PM
Thank you for such kind comments, Ovidiu.
Date: 7/26/2017 2:23:00 PM
I readily agree with everybody else - This really is very good, Afzal! My very best regards! :) john
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Date: 7/26/2017 11:04:00 PM
Thank you so much, John.
Date: 7/23/2017 7:20:00 PM
Yes, my friend, I too have enjoyed American HOrror story. Though I prefer shows a bit less gory. There is something about that series that is a bit over the top . Did you see Bates Motel. Now THAT is horror!!
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Date: 7/24/2017 11:36:00 PM
A soupy-mail 4 u.
Date: 7/23/2017 6:56:00 AM
What lovely imagery Afzal. I love your Haiku....Maria
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Afzal Nusker
Date: 7/23/2017 10:46:00 PM
Thanks a lot, Maria.
Date: 7/21/2017 4:59:00 PM
Gorgeous Afzal! A FAVE! : )
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Date: 7/21/2017 10:36:00 PM
Thank you very much, Connie.
Date: 7/11/2017 7:53:00 PM
wow, this is really pretty. Magical!
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Date: 7/11/2017 10:20:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea.
Date: 7/11/2017 3:26:00 AM
Beautiful imagery.
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Date: 7/11/2017 10:41:00 AM
Thank you, M.L.
Date: 7/10/2017 11:22:00 PM
That haiku is a little beauty. and I can see it come alive :)
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Date: 7/11/2017 12:24:00 AM
Thank you, Darren.
Date: 7/10/2017 9:27:00 AM
Very descriptive write about love, Afzal. Nice sensual poetry. Excellent haiku.
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Date: 7/10/2017 10:47:00 PM
Thank you, Freddie.
Date: 7/10/2017 9:27:00 AM
An open secret, isn't it?? Lovely haiku, love to read you anytime:)
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Date: 7/10/2017 10:51:00 PM
I love to read you anytime as well, thank you, Jo. An arbour like that is a shelter for all of us so yes it is an open secret.

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