Secret Shelter

night's moonlit arbour
         laden with blooming desires,
                            lovers' secret shelter


Date : 07/09/2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Sambourne Avatar
August 30, 2022 at 7:40 AM
You wrap Amour with sensuality under a moonlit sky. Superb writing! Brian
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September 6, 2022 at 5:58 AM
Thanks, Brian.
Jones Avatar
October 17, 2021 at 10:23 PM
lovely
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September 6, 2022 at 5:57 AM
Thanks, Karen.
Bocsa Avatar
July 27, 2017 at 1:53 AM
Wonderful poem reminding me that we all should have Ethics as our house not simple shelter. Thanks for visit and sharing.Blooming desires. Wonderful said like Worte wie blumen.
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July 31, 2017 at 11:31 PM
Thank you for such kind comments, Ovidiu.
Fleming Avatar
July 26, 2017 at 2:23 PM
I readily agree with everybody else - This really is very good, Afzal! My very best regards! :) john
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July 26, 2017 at 11:04 PM
Thank you so much, John.
Dietrich Avatar
July 23, 2017 at 7:20 PM
Yes, my friend, I too have enjoyed American HOrror story. Though I prefer shows a bit less gory. There is something about that series that is a bit over the top . Did you see Bates Motel. Now THAT is horror!!
Nusker Avatar
July 24, 2017 at 11:36 PM
A soupy-mail 4 u.
Williams Avatar
July 23, 2017 at 6:56 AM
What lovely imagery Afzal. I love your Haiku....Maria
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July 23, 2017 at 10:46 PM
Thanks a lot, Maria.
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 21, 2017 at 4:59 PM
Gorgeous Afzal! A FAVE! : )
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July 21, 2017 at 10:36 PM
Thank you very much, Connie.
Dietrich Avatar
July 11, 2017 at 7:53 PM
wow, this is really pretty. Magical!
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July 11, 2017 at 10:20 PM
Thank you, Andrea.
Kiser Avatar
July 11, 2017 at 3:26 AM
Beautiful imagery.
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July 11, 2017 at 10:41 AM
Thank you, M.L.
White Avatar
July 10, 2017 at 11:22 PM
That haiku is a little beauty. and I can see it come alive :)
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July 11, 2017 at 12:24 AM
Thank you, Darren.
Robinson Jr. Avatar
July 10, 2017 at 9:27 AM
Very descriptive write about love, Afzal. Nice sensual poetry. Excellent haiku.
Nusker Avatar
July 10, 2017 at 10:47 PM
Thank you, Freddie.
Daniel Avatar
July 10, 2017 at 9:27 AM
An open secret, isn't it?? Lovely haiku, love to read you anytime:)
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July 10, 2017 at 10:51 PM
I love to read you anytime as well, thank you, Jo. An arbour like that is a shelter for all of us so yes it is an open secret.
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