Charmaine Chircop Poet Tanka

Secret Haven

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                                  A Wooden Cottage
                              in the middle of nowhere
                                 Surrounded by fields
                      Singing birds and Sparkling streams
                            Just You,Me,and Cherry trees
 




Charma

(Inspired by Andrea's dream blog..inspired by my dream....A stranger with a handsome face....a stranger yet so familiar..We are laughing and laughing having fun in  Vast green fields..in the middle of Nowhere..next to a Small Wooden Cottage,,I dreamt this dream about three times..waking up so happy)tnx Andrea for the inspiration..Charma

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Tim Smith January 2, 2015 at 5:26 PM Just reading some of your Tanka poems.... This one is so beautiful.... I love it...ND

John Rhinem July 25, 2010 at 1:56 PM Ps. "I Wonder," if I could have ever been a part of those dreams? Smile, you know, I have dreamnt of "You," more than once dear; and in living wake I still do; holding on to "The Dreams" with all I've got...."Beautiful Charma Charmaine" ~ Smile, I do remember "You;" because "'Your Beauty' Lives Inside My Soul;" long after these days, should they ever come and go, "My Beautiful Love" ~

John Rhinem July 25, 2010 at 1:51 PM Smile ~ "Dreams Come True Sometimes, If One Holds On & Believes" ~ You know I have read All of "Your Beautiful Poems" ~ So passionate so beautiful so colour laced and beyond precious ~ "You Blow Me Away, With "Your Beauty" ~ And my heart melts inside my soul ~ To think I would ever lose "You," is sorrow indeed, "My Beloved," Your, John!:) ~

James Fraser April 22, 2010 at 12:53 PM I really need to find this wooden cottage, just blissful Charmaine >> James

James Peranteau April 16, 2010 at 12:22 PM Sweet poem Charmaine ! How we all in love long for that perfect moment, that dream we all share whether it be a cottage or hut, sand castle or an igloooooo ! *smiles* Great poem Dear ! james

Karin Rodriguez April 15, 2010 at 11:12 AM thats my dream too....very nice. good read, thanx

Dr.Ram Mehta April 14, 2010 at 8:45 PM Very romantic poem with idyllic surroundings

Carolyn Devonshire April 14, 2010 at 8:02 PM Please let us know if you find out who that stranger is, Charma. This is a dream that should be continued! Love, Carolyn

Laura Mckenzie April 14, 2010 at 5:22 PM That sounds great to me! Lovely , Laura :)