Second Wind

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A light breeze falls soft whispering a quiet faith raining kindness breath along the shadow's caress dancing with hues of sweet grace Bite Size Poem 3 Contest Sponsored by: Line Gauthier May 29, 2021

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Jcb Brul

Date: 5/30/2021 2:21:00 AM

So graceful bite-sized poem..Love the imagery! Best wishes!

L Milton Hankins

Date: 5/29/2021 9:07:00 AM

Sweet lines, Gina. Nicely-written in the form that best lends itself to bite-size poetry. Exceptionally well-done.

Heidi Sands

Date: 5/29/2021 7:21:00 AM

Nice, positive Tanka. Well done Regina :)