Karen Jones Poet Rhyme

Second thought heart

Maybe I need solitude 
Romance requires work to do
Am I up to loving true
Is it enough to love you

Perhaps my muse is my mate
The onyx one who got away
And fills my sun with anticipate
Melted moon runs as night time sedates

Is the quest much more to digest
Than delivery of hearts sole quest 
He in the east and I am in the west
Time will tell despite my jest

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Joseph May February 6, 2024 at 7:29 PM "Melted moon runs as night time sedates", Very nicely penned Karen Jones February 7, 2024 at 12:54 AM Thank you Joseph

Susan Manley February 6, 2024 at 1:09 PM Time does tell, but moments slip away. And sometimes we simply need to seize the day. I identify, the muse needs to be fed. Otherwise logic fills your daily thread. Love this Karen. Our inner dialogs are fun to pen in rhyme. - Susan Karen Jones February 7, 2024 at 12:53 AM Indeed thanks for reading Susan

Mystic Rose Rose February 5, 2024 at 3:47 AM Pray time is on your side dear girl, cuz love is something everyone should have a good dose of love. Thank you for your visit today, you made my day ! Karen Jones February 5, 2024 at 4:02 AM Aw that is so sweet and you made mine! Hugs Mystic Rose Rose!

Kim Rodrigues February 4, 2024 at 6:23 PM Maybe I need solitude Romance requires work to do… great starter! … He in the east and I am in the west Time will tell despite my jest. Love it, Karen! Karen Jones February 4, 2024 at 8:03 PM Kim so happy you love it!

Charles Messina February 3, 2024 at 7:14 PM Your only about 2,500 miles away from LA...if you leave on Monday, you could be there by Wednesday (lol) A romantic write, very nicely done, Karen. Karen Jones February 3, 2024 at 10:21 PM lol funny Charles and thanks

Evelyn Judy Buehler February 3, 2024 at 4:40 PM Enjoyed this tale of distant love, Karen. I loved 'Melted moon runs as night time sedates.' Great writing! :) Karen Jones February 3, 2024 at 5:05 PM Thank you Evelyn!

Victor Buhagiar February 2, 2024 at 2:38 AM Great meditation on a lost love. Maybe you will be reunited. Karen Jones February 2, 2024 at 7:22 AM Too early to say that it’s lost or found. We have yet to meet face to face as he is in LA and I’m in Carolina. Anyway I’m in no rush lol

Andrea Dietrich February 1, 2024 at 2:22 PM So creative. Muse as one's mate! Karen Jones February 1, 2024 at 6:46 PM Andrea thanks for reading!

Christina Bowring February 1, 2024 at 8:47 AM Love this poem dear Karen. Reflective thoughts here. The line, ‘ melted moon runs as night time sedates ‘ is glorious. Long distance relationships will always have its hurdles to overcome including the passage of time as well as love. That last stanza is great and profound. Really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing. Hugs and smiles :):) Karen Jones February 1, 2024 at 6:44 PM So kind are your words and thoughts. So glad you enjoyed it! Hugs thank you Christina!

Vijay Pandit February 1, 2024 at 5:24 AM Wonderfully dwelling in the world of romance, Karen. A charming poem that tugs heart and mind. Lovely write! Karen Jones February 1, 2024 at 6:40 PM Thanks Vijay

Jerry Brotherton January 31, 2024 at 7:11 PM the muse is all-consuming and pays no attention to the rules of love or time. Karen Jones February 1, 2024 at 1:49 AM Agreed thanks for commenting Jerry!

Hilda Greenhough January 31, 2024 at 3:25 PM Time to find this guy. A great poem. I enjoyed reading it. Karen Jones January 31, 2024 at 5:03 PM :0) hugs glad you enjoyed

Silent One January 31, 2024 at 11:35 AM Distance is never easy and long distance relationships can be really hard... our muse is always our friend and helps us to express what we suppress and explain things our tongue may struggle with... Karen Jones January 31, 2024 at 2:40 PM Agreed you are wise. Thanks for sharing.

Paula Goldsmith January 31, 2024 at 9:34 AM I enjoyed reading this write. The heart does its own thing. Have a fun/wonderful day writing away............. Karen Jones January 31, 2024 at 2:38 PM So happy you enjoyed it thanks Paula.