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Second thought heart

Maybe I need solitude Romance requires work to do Am I up to loving true Is it enough to love you Perhaps my muse is my mate The onyx one who got away And fills my sun with anticipate Melted moon runs as night time sedates Is the quest much more to digest Than delivery of hearts sole quest He in the east and I am in the west Time will tell despite my jest

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Joseph May

Date: 2/6/2024 7:29:00 PM

"Melted moon runs as night time sedates", Very nicely penned

Karen Jones
Date: 2/7/2024 12:54:00 AM

Thank you Joseph

Susan Manley

Date: 2/6/2024 1:09:00 PM

Time does tell, but moments slip away. And sometimes we simply need to seize the day. I identify, the muse needs to be fed. Otherwise logic fills your daily thread. Love this Karen. Our inner dialogs are fun to pen in rhyme. - Susan

Karen Jones
Date: 2/7/2024 12:53:00 AM

Indeed thanks for reading Susan

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 2/5/2024 3:47:00 AM

Pray time is on your side dear girl, cuz love is something everyone should have a good dose of love. Thank you for your visit today, you made my day !

Karen Jones
Date: 2/5/2024 4:02:00 AM

Aw that is so sweet and you made mine! Hugs Mystic Rose Rose!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/4/2024 6:23:00 PM

Maybe I need solitude Romance requires work to do… great starter! … He in the east and I am in the west Time will tell despite my jest. Love it, Karen!

Karen Jones
Date: 2/4/2024 8:03:00 PM

Kim so happy you love it!

Charles Messina

Date: 2/3/2024 7:14:00 PM

Your only about 2,500 miles away from LA...if you leave on Monday, you could be there by Wednesday (lol) A romantic write, very nicely done, Karen.

Karen Jones
Date: 2/3/2024 10:21:00 PM

lol funny Charles and thanks

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 2/3/2024 4:40:00 PM

Enjoyed this tale of distant love, Karen. I loved 'Melted moon runs as night time sedates.' Great writing! :)

Karen Jones
Date: 2/3/2024 5:05:00 PM

Thank you Evelyn!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/2/2024 2:38:00 AM

Great meditation on a lost love. Maybe you will be reunited.

Karen Jones
Date: 2/2/2024 7:22:00 AM

Too early to say that it’s lost or found. We have yet to meet face to face as he is in LA and I’m in Carolina. Anyway I’m in no rush lol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/1/2024 2:22:00 PM

So creative. Muse as one's mate!

Karen Jones
Date: 2/1/2024 6:46:00 PM

Andrea thanks for reading!

Christina Bowring

Date: 2/1/2024 8:47:00 AM

Love this poem dear Karen. Reflective thoughts here. The line, ‘ melted moon runs as night time sedates ‘ is glorious. Long distance relationships will always have its hurdles to overcome including the passage of time as well as love. That last stanza is great and profound. Really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing. Hugs and smiles :):)

Karen Jones
Date: 2/1/2024 6:44:00 PM

So kind are your words and thoughts. So glad you enjoyed it! Hugs thank you Christina!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/1/2024 5:24:00 AM

Wonderfully dwelling in the world of romance, Karen. A charming poem that tugs heart and mind. Lovely write!

Karen Jones
Date: 2/1/2024 6:40:00 PM

Thanks Vijay

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 1/31/2024 7:11:00 PM

the muse is all-consuming and pays no attention to the rules of love or time.

Karen Jones
Date: 2/1/2024 1:49:00 AM

Agreed thanks for commenting Jerry!

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 1/31/2024 3:32:00 PM

I agree with Silent One's words. Our muse is our constant companion, our mate at times. Nicely done, Karen...hugs, Sara

Karen Jones
Date: 1/31/2024 5:04:00 PM

Thanks hugs back Sara!

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 1/31/2024 3:25:00 PM

Time to find this guy. A great poem. I enjoyed reading it.

Karen Jones
Date: 1/31/2024 5:03:00 PM

:0) hugs glad you enjoyed

Silent One

Date: 1/31/2024 11:35:00 AM

Distance is never easy and long distance relationships can be really hard... our muse is always our friend and helps us to express what we suppress and explain things our tongue may struggle with...

Karen Jones
Date: 1/31/2024 2:40:00 PM

Agreed you are wise. Thanks for sharing.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/31/2024 9:34:00 AM

I enjoyed reading this write. The heart does its own thing. Have a fun/wonderful day writing away.............

Karen Jones
Date: 1/31/2024 2:38:00 PM

So happy you enjoyed it thanks Paula.