Second Stars


twinkle
freeze, thaw

broke hue
true blue

lower,
pointer

death's light
used time

baggage
collapse

fall bowels
black hole

not lost
stardust
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Daniels Avatar
August 4, 2026 at 5:15 AM
beautiful !😊
Rodrigues Avatar
August 2, 2026 at 3:34 PM
Love line 1-4 and last two.
One Avatar
August 2, 2026 at 11:10 AM
Nicely done Paige.. 😊
Hayward Avatar
August 2, 2026 at 5:08 AM
Having to rhyme with footies, its harder than putting your shoes on right after a hard night out... Great poem, I enjoyed!
Onclaud Avatar
August 2, 2026 at 4:14 AM
paige, did you say twinkle, stardust, true blue? you got me spinning!
Buhagiar Avatar
August 1, 2026 at 6:02 AM
Alas, I have never written a footle. You did well.
Kendrick Avatar
July 31, 2026 at 1:44 PM
Interesting work penned. Way to go. Sara K.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
July 31, 2026 at 11:05 AM
delightful set of footles. I admire that you can construct this form. I have no skill with it whatsoever. :-) wishing you well
George Avatar
July 31, 2026 at 6:43 AM
Lovely set of footle. Dear Paige, you try various forms of poetry with success. Great going .
Poet Avatar
July 31, 2026 at 4:27 AM
Beautiful😊🌹 set of footles, Paige. Enjoyed
Smith  Avatar
July 30, 2026 at 11:43 PM
Footle worth a ⭐ or maybe ✨✨
Gibbons Avatar
July 30, 2026 at 7:44 PM
Beautiful footle ✍️paige 😍🥰 i love it 👍🙌 hugs friend ❤️
Hind Avatar
July 30, 2026 at 9:49 PM
hugs friend ~ :)🥰👍
Hind Avatar
July 30, 2026 at 7:54 PM
❤️ what a sweet comment, Dorothy. Nice to meet you on my "page" lol
Rolland Avatar
July 30, 2026 at 6:40 PM
universe is awesome, and may be very dangerous enjoyed
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