Second Ode To Finn

Written: July 19, 2026 for a contest sponsored by: Unica Hija *************** Dear Fin, you velvet-hearted sprite, you steal my chair by perfect right; you rule the house with whiskered grace, then wear innocence upon your face. No monarch ever reigned from race. You stalk a sunbeam down the hall, declare a feather ten feet tall; each paper ball, each dancing string, becomes a wild and wondrous thing— your kingdom needs no crown at all. You purr away my clouded hours, as bees awaken hidden flowers; your emerald eyes, half-moon, half-flame, make every ordinary day the same feel stitched with little miracle game. When midnight sheds her silver glow. You run through shadows, quick as flow. Then cuddle near my sleeping heart. As if you had known it since the start It's loyal caretaker during the night. So here's my ode, dear Fin, to you— long may you rule with velvet paws, ignoring every human law; for every heart must surely bow to one small cat... especially now.
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Goldsmith Avatar
August 18, 2026 at 12:48 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading. What a wonderful write you have here. I like how you did it as a letter. Oh yes, velvet paws always rule. Hooray!!! Have a fun day with your win............
Canerdy Avatar
August 17, 2026 at 12:28 PM
What a GREAT poem--skillfully-composed, vividly descriptive of the royal entity known as CAT! Congrats on your well-deserved win, Sotto! Janice
George Avatar
July 20, 2026 at 8:48 PM
Such a lovely and heartfelt dedication to your sweet and naughty cat. I too have fallen in love with your cat. "When midnight sheds her silver glow. You run through shadows, quick as flow. Then cuddle near my sleeping heart." What a sweet gesture! How I love such feline friends. Unfortunately I am not allowed to keep them.
Hind Avatar
July 19, 2026 at 9:39 PM
sweet LOVE THIS
Andresen Avatar
July 19, 2026 at 12:54 PM
- Sounds like a happy cat and owner... lovely poem, Las :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 19, 2026 at 11:07 AM
Hello Scott,]Sotto Poet[ A lovely ode to your cat Finn. Enjoy your day my friend. . /Darlene/
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