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Second chances

Thou hast knocked thrown thy rocks at my window Perhaps open heart surgery a sharp tool required to get thru decades of barricades the ship that sailed is docking the mutiny so long ago

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Tom Woody

Date: 3/27/2025 11:20:00 AM

This one's a little hard to decipher, no doubt by design. But I think I understand from your title that hurts from long ago may finally be forgiven. Hope all is well Crystol

Crystol Woods
Date: 3/27/2025 12:18:00 PM

I like it! It's whatever you feel from it i suppose. I was thinking of how much harder it is too open your heart once you've been hurt... it seems to take much more convincing to open that door again. And the old saying, " that ship has sailed" can also dock again, giving you a second chance to board. Thanks for indulging my musings! Good to hear from you as usual my friend. Xo