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The spiral staircase made her high heels sing Descending in slow motion, a lovely sight to see Graceful, ever so slightly lifting her flowing gown Bare shoulders and plungent neckline Emotional, he waited by the makeshift altar Clutching handwritten vows and fidgeting He wanted to capture every breathless millisecond This mountaintop villa was truly a dream come true From here the city churches pierced the mist How long he had waited for this moment For many reasons fearing it may never come Sometimes life hangs but by a thread And second chances aren’t always guaranteed In a short ceremony he had married his goddess As husband and wife, waving farewell through the door He closed it, and, now smiling, crossed the square By his side, the new bride he held proudly Life offered now a million possibilities And dreams of a fairy tale to write AP: 2nd place, Honorable Mention 2020 Submitted on May 7, 2018 for contest ONE NINE AND SIXTEEN UPGRADE VERSION sponsored by VIV WIGLEY - RANKED 4TH

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Date: 6/22/2018 9:30:00 AM
Great story telling, Line. Many congrats on your win. Elaine
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Date: 6/22/2018 2:35:00 PM
Thank you so much, Elaine. Most appreciated.
Date: 6/22/2018 1:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, line.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 6/22/2018 7:53:00 AM
Thank you, Subimal.
Date: 6/20/2018 11:33:00 PM
Congratulations Line. Tom
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Line Gauthier
Date: 6/22/2018 7:54:00 AM
Thanks, Tom.
Date: 5/12/2018 2:35:00 AM
I like this. My wife and I (both second time) married in our garden under a black wattle tree with the birds twittering and a few friends singing. The Universe is kind to us. Many wishes, Kai
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/12/2018 7:24:00 AM
Lovely, Kaai. Thank you so much for leaving such a touching comment.
Date: 5/9/2018 8:58:00 AM
Well, Line, I had to wake extra early to make up for comments I did not get to yesterday. Anyway, another day, another dollar. Have a good one!! And see you later.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/9/2018 8:09:00 PM
Who needs sleep anyway! LOL
Date: 5/9/2018 8:18:00 AM
I love seeing this from the new groom's perspective: Emotional, he waited by the makeshift altar Clutching handwritten vows and fidgeting He wanted to capture every breathless millisecond This is a WOW.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/9/2018 8:09:00 PM
Thank you so much, Caren. Most appreciated.
Date: 5/8/2018 12:33:00 PM
I had adolescent romance excitement throughout the poem, you stirred me thus. Your poem captured and held me. I just love love. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/8/2018 10:23:00 PM
So sweet. Thank you so much for your lovely visit an comment, CayCay.
Date: 5/8/2018 8:40:00 AM
Nicely done Line...very smooth and enticing...love and light...^WW^
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/8/2018 9:04:00 AM
Thank you, WW. Most appreciated.
Date: 5/8/2018 4:47:00 AM
Wonderful story you weave into your poem, Line. good luck in contest.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/8/2018 9:05:00 AM
Thank you so much, Harry, for your lovely visit and comment.
Date: 5/7/2018 9:40:00 PM
Very nice good luck in the contest
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/7/2018 9:46:00 PM
Thank you, Pashang. Much appreciated.
Date: 5/7/2018 9:19:00 PM
I love the scene you created, Line, the imagery is great.. Luck in the contest.. Hugs
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/7/2018 9:46:00 PM
Thanks, Eve. Most appreciated.
Date: 5/7/2018 8:03:00 PM
What a beautiful scene! Love this. P.S. soupmail
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Date: 5/7/2018 5:45:00 PM
Oh my goodness. I have not even had a chance to SEE this contest yet and here you have already put out your version for it. This is very cleverly composed, Line. I think it deserves a good placement!!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/7/2018 9:15:00 PM
I immediately got a vision when I read the contest rules. I love it when that happens. LOL
Date: 5/7/2018 5:45:00 PM
Love that fairy tale ending.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/7/2018 9:15:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea, for your most appreciated visit and comment.
Date: 5/7/2018 5:10:00 PM
A great romantic verse Line, yes, everyone deserves a second chance. Good luck. Tom.
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Date: 5/7/2018 9:16:00 PM
Thank you, Tom. Most appreciated.
Date: 5/7/2018 4:47:00 PM
Such fantastic imagery, Line!! Your free verse had me in a trance like state, for the moment.. Amazing!!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/7/2018 9:16:00 PM
Thank you so much, Robertina. Most appreciated.
Date: 5/7/2018 1:24:00 PM
Line, I love the magic you have woven with this oh so romantic story. We all deserve a second chance, this one is very beautiful GL in the contest xxoo
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/7/2018 3:08:00 PM
Thanks, Mike, for much appreciated visit and comment.

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