Seaweed

Here, take time to admire this tangled clump of seaweed, its knotted form, how it becomes almost a poem in the way it folds around a secret hidden deep within, how it tumbles along the beach carrying off a mystery wrapped in the breath of a wind.

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Di11y Da11y

Date: 10/31/2024 12:05:00 PM

Ahh I love it as the embodiment of a poem appears before my eyes. Magical Paul, love it!

Paul Willason
Date: 11/1/2024 5:08:00 AM

Good to bring a little magic to the experience of the poem dear DD....you bring equal joy in yr comments. Thankyou ...very much appreciated. Paul

Lin Lane

Date: 10/31/2024 8:17:00 AM

Another mysterious sea tale. You have such a love for the sea, and you show it so well in your poetry. That wasn't an intentional rhyme. ;-)

Lin Lane
Date: 11/1/2024 5:20:00 AM

Thank you, Paul for the compliment. Dementia hasn't set in... yet. ;-)

Paul Willason
Date: 11/1/2024 5:04:00 AM

Indeed...my poetry us fed well by the images of water be it the sea, the river, the coast. Grew up seeped in its mystery and now live within its reach. Thankyou Lin for your observations...always value that keen mind of yours....