Seaweed

Here,
take time to admire
this tangled clump
of seaweed, 
its knotted form,
how it becomes 
almost a poem
in the way it folds 
around a secret 
hidden deep within,
how it tumbles 
along the beach
carrying off a mystery
wrapped in the breath
of a wind.
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Lane Avatar
October 31, 2024 at 8:17 AM
Another mysterious sea tale. You have such a love for the sea, and you show it so well in your poetry. That wasn't an intentional rhyme. ;-)
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November 1, 2024 at 5:20 AM
Thank you, Paul for the compliment. Dementia hasn't set in... yet. ;-)
Willason Avatar
November 1, 2024 at 5:04 AM
Indeed...my poetry us fed well by the images of water be it the sea, the river, the coast. Grew up seeped in its mystery and now live within its reach. Thankyou Lin for your observations...always value that keen mind of yours....
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