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Seat-Seekers

Two fat guys on a subway train, Taking lots of space, Had room enough between them For a thin one to embrace. A standing pole prevented Easy access to the seat So most of us considered It not worth it to compete. But twice, new passengers approached And asked one guy to move, A question totally ignored For he was in his groove. With phone in hand and head kept down He blew off the request And acted like he wasn’t The malingerer addressed. The first seat-seeker merely shrugged; Resigned himself to stand. The second asked again and then Took matters into hand. He squeezed into the little gap And made himself at home, Inspiring admiration and The spur to write this poem.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 10/23/2019 9:54:00 AM
This reminds me of when I flew one time. I had a window seat (my favorite), and the other passenger had the aisle seat. Then this Goliath of a guy lugging a packed hand bag plopped his rear in the middle seat and forced his bag under the seat in front of him with great difficulty. To make it worse, he smelled and his heavy coat and protruding belly all but obscured the man in the aisle seat. And so it was for the next two hours! Personal hygiene should be mandatory for people flying/ M
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Date: 10/20/2019 5:13:00 PM
I can picture the scene so clearly Ilene!:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/20/2019 4:58:00 PM
This poem is so cute I can just 'pinch its cheeks.' Bravo, Ilene. A FAVE for me. Smiles,, Gershon
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Date: 10/18/2019 9:23:00 AM
- I can see this before my eyes, Ilene :))) - hugs and lovely weekend // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/18/2019 8:11:00 AM
This was really fun to read Ilene, as is all of your work. I could see this scene play out as if I were there. And I for one am glad they didn't move or we might not have had this wonderful poem to read
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Date: 10/17/2019 8:39:00 PM
I wouldn't want to sit between to big people because I don't know, but I would think they probably smell. I know, this is offensive to some, but a poem like this brings up all kinds of different sensibilities to consider. Good poem though ilene. :) <3 :)
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Date: 10/17/2019 7:55:00 PM
Well said! In Hawai'i, some are wont to cough on the offender or break wind as they squat down between. Others pretend they have lice or some other irritating malady. One thing is clear, no lout is concerned about shaming his mother! Aloha! Rico
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