Valsa George Poet Footle

Seastrand Footles

Wind calm
Sun warm

Sky blue
In view

Ships sail
Leave trail

Clouds roam
On dome

Birds fly
In sky

Strand wide
Men glide

Boys play
With clay

Men swim
Some skim

Time flees
Light gleams

Sun sets
Dusk falls

Waves whirl
Tides curl

On shore
Waves roar

Rise high
Touch sky

Strong gales
Puff sails

Gulls shriek
Hawks screech

Men go
In tow

Crowd thins
Night wins

October.10. 2022

~ Placed Nineth~

Brian Strand Premier Choice Poetry Contest

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Bill Baker October 18, 2022 at 3:53 PM Nice Footles, Valsa. Fun to read. Hugs, Bill

Pashang Salehi October 14, 2022 at 12:02 PM Me Crying for the women of Iran...

Sara Kendrick October 14, 2022 at 8:52 AM Great list of footles on the winners' list. Way to go. Congratulations. Sara

JC Brul October 13, 2022 at 2:06 AM Congratulations dear friend. This sets of vivid and stunning footles are truly mesmerizing!! You are a master of footles! A fave for me.

Sotto Poet October 12, 2022 at 10:53 AM Back with congratulations on your well-deserved win. I hope you're doing well. Blessings

Sam Kauffman October 12, 2022 at 10:08 AM Valsa, dear friend, I loved walking the beach with you and watching the day end in the sunset! There is such joyful appreciation of the beauty of the wind, the waves, a day to play on the seashore and the twilight. Love the last line - "night wins!" Just terrific. Congratulations on your win. Blessings, prayers and a sandy hug!

Victor Buhagiar October 11, 2022 at 5:14 AM Truly enjoyed your footle, dear Valsa.

Michael Tor October 10, 2022 at 6:58 PM Enjoyed reading your Footle Valsa...

Eve Roper October 10, 2022 at 4:59 PM great footles, Valsa.

Rico Leffanta October 10, 2022 at 1:07 PM Ships do leave trails, in the wake and in the sky! Enjoyed!

Malabika Ray Choudhury October 10, 2022 at 10:28 AM Dear Valsa, creative Footle! You have shown mastery of this poetic form! Love ~ Mala

Sotto Poet October 10, 2022 at 8:12 AM Only a few words are needed to describe these very descriptive combinations. Best wishes to you, Valsa.

Vijay Pandit October 10, 2022 at 7:56 AM Highly descriptive pairs in just a few words. Best to you, Valsa.

Kim Rodrigues October 10, 2022 at 7:21 AM So beautiful! Love it, Valsa!