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Seastrand Footles

Wind calm Sun warm Sky blue In view Ships sail Leave trail Clouds roam On dome Birds fly In sky Strand wide Men glide Boys play With clay Men swim Some skim Time flees Light gleams Sun sets Dusk falls Waves whirl Tides curl On shore Waves roar Rise high Touch sky Strong gales Puff sails Gulls shriek Hawks screech Men go In tow Crowd thins Night wins October.10. 2022 ~ Placed Nineth~ Brian Strand Premier Choice Poetry Contest

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Bill Baker

Date: 10/18/2022 3:53:00 PM

Nice Footles, Valsa. Fun to read. Hugs, Bill

Pashang Salehi

Date: 10/14/2022 12:02:00 PM

Me Crying for the women of Iran...

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/14/2022 8:52:00 AM

Great list of footles on the winners' list. Way to go. Congratulations. Sara

Jcb Brul

Date: 10/13/2022 2:06:00 AM

Congratulations dear friend. This sets of vivid and stunning footles are truly mesmerizing!! You are a master of footles! A fave for me.

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/12/2022 10:53:00 AM

Back with congratulations on your well-deserved win. I hope you're doing well. Blessings

Sam Kauffman

Date: 10/12/2022 10:08:00 AM

Valsa, dear friend, I loved walking the beach with you and watching the day end in the sunset! There is such joyful appreciation of the beauty of the wind, the waves, a day to play on the seashore and the twilight. Love the last line - "night wins!" Just terrific. Congratulations on your win. Blessings, prayers and a sandy hug!